Tragedy of Daniel and Jake

By John Meyers

Published on Feb 15, 2012

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The Tragedy of Daniel and Jake Chapter 10 By John Meyers

Disclaimer: Okay so I know this took a long time to write. Sorry, by the way. School's kicked my ass recently but I knew I wanted to get a chapter up for Valentine's Day. Anyway, if you're under 18 it's illegal for you to be reading this. I do not own anything copyrighted. This story is purely fictional, any likenesses to persons living or dead is entirely coincidental. There, now that that's out of the way, read on!


Danny's POV

I couldn't help but feel elated as I walked into school this morning. Today was Valentine's Day and everyone seemed to be feeling it's effects. Everyone was happier. Teachers weren't yelling at PDA (Public Displays of Affection) as much. Not to mention the pink! Normally I don't care for pink all that much, but today was an exception. Today also happened to be Eli's birthday. I know. What day could Eli possibly embody more than Valentine's Day?

His birthday present, because it was rather one long present- not entirely in that way- began last night, when I practically forced him into my bed, though he didn't need much persuading. We kissed and cuddled, though it was late when we we went to bed so we weren't up long. Today was going to be one big present, in addition to his actual present of course. I know he's going to love it! We learned how to say "Happy Valentine's Day" in Spanish class.

"Feliz dia de Valentin," We both whispered to each other. We were in groups of two, saying "Happy Valentine's Day" to one another. Eli and I were holding hands, an interaction that still left me with butterflies in my stomach, and I had briefly considered kissing him. I didn't though. There would be plenty of time for that later. I gave him a small heart shaped pinata in Spanish. It could fit in the palm of his hand, was paper macheed red, and had a white "1", painted on it.

"What's the one for?" Eli asked curiously as he hugged me for his gift. I could tell he wanted to kiss me, though I don't know why. That's not his only gift and I know he doesn't understand what it means right now, but I was grateful anyway.

During our Valentine's Day party, because that's what we did in that class, I grabbed a bag out of my backpack filled with little slips of paper. When Eli asked what those were, I emptied the contents of the bag on his head, showering him in little heart shaped valentines.

"What's all this?" He said, picking hearts out of his hair, laughing.

"This is one Valentine's card for every day since the day we kissed," And then I decided to pile on as much mushy crap as possible. "Because when I'm with you, everyday is like Valentine's Day." This statement cause Eli to turn solid red in embarassment, and earned an, "Aawwwwwwwwwww," out of my teacher and a few of the girls in our class.

"You're really piling on the mush heavy today, aren't you?" He mumbled out embarassedly.

"You bet I am, it's too good of an opportunity to pass up."

I walked him to all of his classes, which we normally didn't do, if for no other reason than it seems a little too sappy for our tastes. Today though, was an exception. All I could think about in APUSH was Eli's gift and what we were going to do after school. I did notice, however, that Dakota seemed particularly flirty in history class.

AP Calculus was no better. The entire time our teacher was trying to explain some convoluted problem, I was daydreaming about Eli and I made a heart graph on my calculator with a "9" inside of it. I plugged in all of the graph coordinates and put my calculator in my bag, intending to show Eli later.

When I got to English, Eli was already there. He saved my customary seat next to him and I sat down in it.

"I made something for you in AP Cal," I dug out my calculator from my bag.

"What is i- Oh, cool!" I handed him my calculator and he examined the heart on my screen. "How'd you get it to do that, and what's the nine for?"

"I had to plug in the coordinates individually, but I was daydreaming anyway so it didn't matter, and the nine is a secret." Eli's eyebrows arched incredulously.

"YOU, Daniel Aaron Hastings, were daydreaming in AP Cal? Why do I find that hard to believe?" He handed me my calculator back.

"I was distracted," I said dreamily, putting the calculator back in my bag.

"By what?" He leaned in close and intertwined his fingers into mine.

"You'll see," I told him, kissing him quickly before our teacher walked in. We had a test in English today, which I know Eli did not study for. I kept casually "tilting" my paper a little to check the answers, letting Eli see what I'd put. I knew it was working because every so often, Eli would erase a spot on his paper furiously and rewrite something.

When we got to lunch, I bought his, though it was still the same crap so it didn't matter much. I manipulated my mashed potatoes into a "2" on my tray. Eli looked over and saw the number.

"Will you please just tell me what all the numbers are for?" Eli asked exasperatedly, a smile spreading across his face.

"Be patient," I told him, my smile threatening to split my face in half.

We reviewed for a test in Med Pro. Our teacher, Ms. Warrington, let us talk, and Eli and I kept dropping hints over what we got eachother for Valentine's Day. I kept telling him that mine would blow his out of the water. We said this playfully of course. One thing I loved about Eli is that we could joke about anything. It was so effortless for us.

On the bus back to school I got the pinata and calculator back from Eli. When he asked why I just told him that they were part of the rest of his gift and I left it at that. And then the day continued... -------------------------------------------------------------------------

Eli's POV

Slowly my steps creaked over to the speakers with the sticky note on it. The pinata, calculator and a peice of paper with a two on it were lying in front of the speaker, forming, 192. "Play 192", the note said. I took it off and laid it next to Danny's speakers. My hand stretched out before me and I scrolled through a playlist of numbers until I found 192. I pressed play. A quiet series of guitar notes played and I instantly recognized the song.

"Restless tonight, because I wasted the light. Between both these times, I drew a really thin line." I heard a creak from behind me and I turned to see Danny. He was standing in the doorway. He was just wearing shorts, his shirt was in his hand, and he was smiling faintly. "It's nothing I planned, not that I can, but you should be mine, across that line." Step by step he walked over to me, throwing his shirt in the corner without looking, never taking his eyes off of me. Without thinking we came together, lips gliding and caressing each others. "If I traded it all, if I gave it all away for one thing, just for one thing." His hands cupped my face and we gazed into each others eyes. "If I sorted it out, if I knew all about this one thing, wouldn't that be something?" Our tongues battled for control and he gently led us to his bed, where we sat down and parted. He got back up and grabbed the heart pinata. He sat back down next to me and told me to open it.

I tried to find a crease but couldn't. He lightly took it and twisted it, the paper ripping beneath his fingers. He put it back in my hand and I saw a tiny flash of silver in the heart. I reached in with my fingers and pulled out a long, thin chain of silver, and at the end of it... was a tiny silver heart. It had, "Always" engraved into it and I felt myself welling up.

"Open it," he said again. I gently pulled at the edge, and it snapped open to reveal a picture of the two of us. I was much younger, much more happy, and so was he. It was the picture from the shelf downstairs; the one of us at his birthday party. We were both smiling from ear to ear like we didn't have a care in the world. It was perfect.

"I thought and thought, but nothing sounded right. Nothing sounded perfect. Eli, this is just one half of your gift. That is your Valentine's Day present, but I have one for your birthday too." He held my hand in his, brushing his fingers against my palm. "Eli, you've been so patient, and so understanding. Eli, it's not something you can see. It's not something you can touch, or feel." His eyes were swimming, not with tears, but with love, and those chocolate orbs seemed to sparkle as he said, "It's not something that you can hold, but it is my gift to you." He kissed me again, sending sparks along my body. He pushed me down, laying me on the bed with him on top of me. I laid the heart down on his bedside table, overcome with affection for this boy on top of me. His hands roamed my body, running wild through my hair and tickling my skin. My body began reacting of it's own accord. Suddenly it was too hot in his room. All of my skin began tingling and my breathing became labored at the thought...

"Tell me." I whispered to him, running my hands up his sides, nibbling on his ear. I grinded into him as both of our cocks swelled within their restraints. "Tell me what you're giving me, Danny." Say it. I need to hear him say it. Time seemed to stand still as he framed the words... The chocolate orbs of his eyes met mine, his amazing lips formed around the sentence, and I heard his angelic voice say,

"I'm giving you my virginity." The words sent a jolt of electricity straight to my heart and my cock. We came together again with a vengeance, tongues and lips uniting us into a single being. I moaned as he lifted my shirt over my head, the fabric pulling at my face, leaving static in my hair. When my head popped out of my shirt I flipped us over so I was on top of him.

"Say it again." I said with a smirk, coming down to lick along his neck. He moaned out,

"I'm giving you my virginity." His hands rubbed along my ass through my shorts and I moved up and down his neck, lightly biting the skin. When I sucked on his neck he moaned again and his hips thrust upwards, pushing our cocks into eachother through our shorts. I was almost completely hard already and my shorts were tenting out very obviously. Danny's hands made their way under the waistband of my underwear, groping my ass and massaging my cheeks. All of a sudden, he stopped. His body tensed up, all of his muscles locked in place and his hands froze... ------------------------------------------------------------------------

Danny's POV

Okay, you can do this. You can do this. I talked to myself as I was brought up short with my hands down the backside of Eli's pants. My fingers were feeling soft, hairless, warm skin. My cock was practically screaming to be let out of my underwear and I wanted this more than I could say, but I couldn't keep going. My room was too hot, my stomach was threatening to boil it's contents over, and I might have been on drugs with all the shaking my hands were doing. Eli stopped sucking on my neck and looked at me, confused.

"Are you okay?" Eli looked concerned and I had to take a few deep breaths before I answered.

"Yeah, yeah I'm okay."

"Oh my God, you're not ready." Eli went to get up but I moved my hands out of his pants and wound my arms around his back, pressing him closer to me.

"No, no. I'm ready, but I'm just.. I'm nervous." God, I'm pathetic. No other man on the planet would think twice before having sex. No other man would be nervous about it. My heart was beating a million miles an hour. I wanted this so badly that I probably could have cried, but I was unbelievably nervous.

"It's okay to be nervous." Eli smiled, laughing, revealing perfect white teeth and he took one my hands in his. "It's normal to be nervous. Most guys wouldn't admit it, but everyone gets nervous their first time." He kissed me lightly, helping to calm my nerves. Slowly our kiss turned deeper and we both began to moan. I felt my nerves building back up. "Are you sure you're okay?"

"Yeah, I'm ready." Eli wrapped his hand around my wrist, his touch sending tingles up my arm, and slowly led my right hand down his side.

"Do you think it would help if I gave you your Valentine's Day gift now?" He had his signature child-like smirk splayed across his face. I could tell just from the look in his eyes that I would love it, so I had to have it.

"It might..." I couldn't help but smile. Everything about Eli made me smile like I didn't have a care in the world. He winked at me before rolling off of my bed. He walked over to his backpack, sexy ass swinging all the way beneath those thin basketball shorts, and bent down to get something out of it. I felt my cock throb in my shorts before he stood back up, and showed me two pieces of long, rectangular paper.

"Do you know what these are?" His smile was threatening to split his face in two.

"Pieces of paper that I assume must have some romantic value given your face," I answered smartly, causing us both to laugh. He shook his head from side to side before coming to sit down next to me.

"You know how you just absolutely adore, love, cherish, and practically worship Maroon 5?" He was trying harder not to smile now.

"Yeah," I answered simply. Where is he going with this?

"Well," He put the paper in my hand. "Here!" When I brought it up to look at, because the light was horrible, I saw a lot of things. I saw a barcode at the end of it. I saw a whole bunch of letters and words all along the paper including a date and the words, "Verizon Arena", but the thing my eyes locked onto, the thing that made my jaw drop, was the "Maroon 5" logo across the tickets!

"Eli! OH MY GOD!" I jumped him, knocking us both off of my bed, and we rolled around on the floor while I planted kiss after kiss over as much of his body as possible. He was laughing hysterically, telling me to get off before my mom came to check on what that was.

"She's gone for the weekend. And I don't care if the whole damn school walks in! Eli, this is amazing! Thank you! Thank you!" I continued to plant kiss after kiss on my boyfriend, the affection boiling over until I couldn't hold it in. Eli stopped my by lightly putting his hand on my cheek, the oddest expression, like one of happiness, achievement, and confusion, crossing his face.

"Is your mom really gone for the whole weekend?" The look on his face left me speechless, but as a result, what I said made me blush.

"Uh-, yeah. Uhm. That was sort of... Another part of, you know, your present," Eli's eyes lit up like a kid's on Christmas and he lightly pulled me down so our lips could caress eachothers.

"You know, you're adorable when you blush," He laughed while I blushed some more and kissed me again, the kiss becoming deeper and deeper until our tongues were wrestling for control and I had to part for air.

"Maybe I should part for air before I asphyxiate," Eli rolled his eyes.

"Why do you have to use such big words? It kills the mood." Eli said playfully.

"Are you calling me a mood killer?" I narrowed my eyes at him and we both laughed.

"Maybe," He answered back seriously. "What are you going to do about it?" He raised one of his eyebrows like some guy from an old west movie at a showdown.

"Why don't you get up on the bed and I'll show you what I'll do about it." I got up and pulled him up. He jumped onto my bed, turning to face me.

"Hurry up before I lose interest," He joked at me.

"You're gonna pay for that," I said, lying down next to him.

"Good Lord, I hope so." He brought me in for an intense kiss, our tongues wrestling roughly while he had his hands running through my hair, pulling us closer together. Eli rolled on top of me and I was beginning to feel myself thrown into the bitch position in this relationship. Eli nibbled on my neck while I ran my hands up and down his sides, feeling the soft skin pass under my fingertips. He pulled back to look at me. When I looked into his hazel eyes, and I saw the light in them, I moved my hand on my own under his waistband and felt his hip. Slowly soft skin grazed past my fingertips, and then my hand was right in the middle of Eli's body. His eyes were closed and his cheeks were red from emotion and heat. I could feel every heartbeat that pulsed through him and now he was frozen, both of us stuck in one moment in time as my hand moved down, slowly, cautiously. Our pounding hearts and labored breathing were the only sounds in the room and the soft skin gliding under my touch left my cock straining in my briefs... and then I felt it.

Instantaneously Eli's eyes snapped open and we rushed together in a collision of emotional fire. I could literally see fireworks behind my eyelids as our tongues battled and my hand grasped around the base of his cock. It was soft and hard at the same time. An electric current connected my hand to this most intimate part of Eli's body. My own cock was harder than it had ever been in my entire life and I wanted nothing more at that moment than to be closer in every way to him.

His cock was hot as hell in my hands and it grew and pulsed and throbbed while I massaged and jacked it. The thing felt bigger than a footlong sub from Subway and I squeezed it lightly, earning a moan and a buck from Eli. Our lips parted for breath and we met each others' eyes. His hazel orbs were alight with fire and youthful lust, his cheeks were flushed, his hair was messed up in all the right places, and his signature smirk was splayed across his lips. He was perfect.

Eli licked and nibbled on my neck, shimmying his shorts off slowly. I closed my eyes and arced in pleasure while Eli gently bit my neck. My hand slowly worked up and down Eli's cock, massaging his hot, hard, throbbing cock. Every few seconds as Eli was working his way down my body, teasing and biting at my nipples, he would moan out in bliss. I worked my thumb around his head, earning a shudder from the amazing boy on top of me and he shot me one look of completely impish desire.

"You're turn," He moved my hand slowly off of his cock and I began to run it through his hair, relishing the soft locks as they flowed beneath my touch. His mouth was tickling circles around my bellybutton, causing me to giggle and writhe around under him. The smile on my face was so... incredible. Never had I imagined that sex would be so fun. His tongue licked it's way down my belly button, stopping as his hands slowly pulled down my shorts, the elastic scratching erotically down my waist and legs, and suddenly there I was. I was naked, my hard cock standing at attention for the whole world to see, with my shorts around my ankles. I felt self concious for only the briefest of moments, and then I saw the look on Eli's face as he pulled my shorts from my feet. It was indescribably beautiful.

His eyes drank in every detail, lustily memorizing every part of my teen cock and body. His hands, delicately reached out and he just barely grazed the tips of his fingers up the underside of my cock, causing me to arch my back in pleasure. Damn it all, he's a tease. I heard him laugh as he brought in his mouth, oh god! Here it comes! I'm about to get a blowjob! He stopped just short and breathed heavily, blowing his hot, sexy breath over the head of my cock. Dammit all! I moaned out and involuntarily thrust my hips upwards. He snickered again, obviously pleased with my reaction. My head shot up and I glared down at him, playfully of course. The corner of my lips were barely turned up in a smile, but he was being a tease. He just laughed at my expression. His fingers traced lightly across my balls and he began licking at my inner thigh while his fingers continued their, oh so light, fondling of my balls. Never before had I felt such ecstasy.

Slowly his tongue licked it's way up my thigh until he had nowhere else to go except to my cock. His hand wrapped gingerly around the base, causing me to jump slightly. His lips pressed lightly against my testicles and he took one into his mouth. I almost screamed out a moan as this whole new experience overcame all that came before it. His hand squeezed my cock harder and he slowly began working it, up and down, his hand stopping just at the edge of my head, causing me to jolt and writhe with pleasure.

Slowly he moved up. His tongue was right where my cock met my balls, and slowly he licked his way up the sensitive underside. He flicked his tongue when he got to the edge of my head and I moaned loud enough for everyone on our street to hear me. Then his mouth descended on my cock. I had to twist the bedsheets in my hands to keep from thrusting up. His tongue was flicking along the underside of my cock and he was alternating pressure in the most erotic way. It went back and forth from almost no suction to vacuum force suction and I could tell that, even if he wasn't in the same position, he must still be enjoying it.

"Eli," I moaned out. "Eli, stop for a second, I want to try something." I almost didn't think he was going to stop, but he reluctantly did. "Scoot yourself around here so I can do it too." He smiled impishly and asked,

"You want to sixty-nine?" He looked as though he couldn't believe it.

"Well, I'd have preffered a more romantic term, but essentially yes." We both laughed lightly.

"Alright, but you may want to be the one on top."

"Why?"

"More control. It's a lot easier to hold up your own bodyweight and control how much you take than it is to lie down and control how much you take. I don't want to choke you or anything." We both busted up laughing and he crawled up the bed next to me. I scooted down, noticing two things; that Eli had ditched his pants while he was pleasuring me, and that his cock was HUGE! It had to be ten inches easily, maybe eleven, and it was as almost as big around as my wrist. Suddenly I was having doubts, but I wanted to do this. For Eli and myself. I crawled down and straddled over him. He wasted no time in taking my cock in his mouth. It took me off guard for a second.

As I stared down the monster staring back at me, I was overcome with curiosity. I leaned all the way down and began licking from the base to the head. I didn't feel like I was going all that slow, but it felt like it took me forever to get up to his head. When I got to the head I planted a light kiss on it, and Eli bucked up and moaned. I licked around the head and slowly began taking Eli's cock into my mouth. OH MY GOD! It actually hurt my jaw to keep it open this wide. I tried to flick my tongue like Eli was and could only get a little more than a third of the way down. Okay, he had to be bigger than ten. I used one of my hands to massage his balls and I moved up and down, up and down, my hair falling into my face.

Eli moaned out, sending vibrations to my cock that made me spasm in ecstasy. I unwittingly tried to tell him to "watch out if he was going to do that", but I just wound up doing the same thing and he almost choked me when he thrusted up involuntarily, pushing even more of his massive cock into my mouth. I could feel it at the back of my throat as I came up and down, alternating suction and trying to copy what Eli was doing to me. I could feel myself getting closer and closer and I kept moaning out more and more, which in turn caused Eli moan, which got me closer and made me moan more. Talk about a vicious circle.

Eli changed his technique randomly and all of a sudden, I could barely keep up with the sensations that were racking my body. I felt my cum boiling up in the back of my balls, getting closer and closer... and closer. I tried to tell him, around his cock, that I was going to cum, but he answered with a moan of his own and I felt his cock grow in my mouth, cramping my jaw, before he came, spurt after spurt of hot cum filling my mouth and hitting the back of my throat. When he did that, the taste, the knowledge, everything about what was going on sent me tumbling over the edge with force, causing me to cum violently with easily the most forceful orgasm I'd ever had. My entire body shook and after I emptied into Eli's mouth, I just collapsed over, gasping heavily at what had just happened.

We both laid there for what must have been five minutes, gasping and panting heavily. My mind was blown. Nothing, and I mean NOTHING in my entire life had ever come close to the feelings I just had. I continued to lay there and eventually Eli decided to scooch on up next to me, even though I was laying with my head at the wrong end of my bed. He snuggled up to me, throwing his arm over my chest and I scooted in closer.

"Happy Valentine's Day," He said dreamily, closing his eyes while laying his head partially on my shoulder. I kissed the top of his head before saying,

"Happy Valentine's Day," And then I smiled and fell asleep, knowing that this was the best Valentine's Day ever! -----------------------------------------------------------------------

This chapter is probably my favorite one so far. It was remarkably fun to write and I'm so very very sorry it took so long to get up. I hope I didn't lose any readers over the absence! Anyway, normal stuff applies. Tell me what you think at johnmeyerz36@yahoo.com

Next: Chapter 12


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