The TNT files, chapter 2
The following story is fiction. It describes sexually-explicit erotic events between males. If you are offended by this material, are too young, or live in an area where it is not allowed, don't read it. In the world of this story, the characters don't always use condoms. In the real world, everybody should practice safe sex.
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Again, my thanks go to Evan, Patrick, Ash, and Tim for their friendship and encouragement. Tim, this is your story as well as mine. (Yes, folks, he wrote of course all the Tim-Letters. So maybe this story isn't that fictitious after all?)
Thanks, baby, for making it happen! --Tom
OneSillyRat@aol.com Part 2: The Letters
Dear Rat,
Yours was the first "fan letter," if that's what it was, that I've ever received. I have to tell you, I loved "Icy's Revenge." Perhaps you should finish the "Dr. Tim" story for me!
You have me intrigued. I wonder who you think I am. I wonder who you are. Is the reference to a sleeping lion in the last line a hint?
I hope you are writing for Nifty or ASSGM or somewhere. You certainly have the touch.
Thanks again for your letter.
Tim
Hey Tim,
Thanks for replying. You don't seem to be who I thought you were, so thanks, too, for taking this so kindly. I'm still a bit shocked at my own audacity. On the other side I find this whole thing hilariously funny. So, to wrap this up, for some reason I thought you were the guy who writes "Ambush" on Nifty, so yes, the lion was a hint. Evan and I have been exchanging emails this last year, he's one of my favorite authors. You sound so much like him! Am I at least right in assuming you've read his stuff?
You're the first person I ever sent a story to, and your generous praise means a lot to me. It was your story that inspired me, after all, and I'm eager to read the next chapter.
--Rat
Hey Rat,
I can't believe it. Evan Bradley is one of my dearest friends. Of course I read his things. He's the person I chose to come out to about six months ago. Incidentally, he doesn't like my story much. I'll have one he likes better showing up on Nifty in a few months or so. It will be in the adult friends section and will, I think, be called "Out of the Night."
I must tell you. The lion reference in "Icy's Revenge" made me think perhaps your letter was from Evan! I sent him your letter and story. He loved it! So, you really must do some more writing on your own.
Good luck!
Tim
Hey Rat,
If we're going to keep corresponding, do you want me to keep calling you "Rat"?
I have several things to tell you. First of all, I talked with Evan for about an hour last week. We talked about the latest chapter of Ambush, where he used some ideas I had given him. (I haven't liked Ron very much, and Evan is obviously going to have Ron learn that he can't just fuck the daylights out of Evan whenever the two of them have a problem.) Evan roared when I told him that you thought he had written my Amy chapter. He liked your Icy's Revenge, and he made a great suggestion.
Here's what we're thinking. Chapter two is done. I have chapters three and four pretty well lined out. I'll let you in on what happens because I have a reason. In chapter two Tim goes to the address where he is given viagra and roofies and humiliated in several ways by the three tormentors from the previous night. One of them takes pictures.
The next night he is ordered back to the apartment, where only two of the guys appear. His absence isn't explained. But the talkative one tells him they've decided to make him their cocksucker and pussyboy and they proceed to initiate him into his new duties.
In chapter 4, it's early Sunday. Cedric, a gorgeous Black guy, shows up at Tim's place, almost tearfully apologetic. He explains that he didn't know what his friends were doing, that he doesn't blame Tim for the F (and it's only a mid-term grade). Tim can make it go away if Cedric makes up the work. He tells Tim that Mark, his roommate, the one who was taking pictures, has opted out of the whole thing, thought his friends were going too far. So Mark has given Cedric the cd with the pix on it, and C has brought it to Tim. Tim is so relived that he begins to cry. At that point, Cedric hugs him, kisses him, tells him it's going to be all right. He carries Tim into the bedroom and they spend the day having fun in bed.
Now, the story was supposed to end there. Evan points out, however, that it could continue with Cedric and Tim as a gay couple, and the other three guys could be characters who are developed as well.
It occurs to me that your Icy story could very well be expanded and form the nucleus of chapter 5. The narrator you use couldn't be Cedric, but it could be Trey, the one who does all the talking in chapter1. Would you like to collaborate with me on chapter 5, if Dr. Tim gets that far?
Think about it. It will be a while before I get chapters three and four written.
Stay in touch, buddy.
Tim
Hey Tim,
Rat really doesn't sound that nice! I made that name up because I thought you were Evan. I wanted him to wonder who I might be. If you want you can call me Tommy, like he does.
I feel incredibly flattered that you asked me to collaborate with you for chapter 5 - I'm not even a native speaker! With what you told me about your storyline I don't think it'd be too difficult to fit some of my little revenge story in. It just would be necessary for Tim, when he is planning his revenge, to know about that crush Trey has on him. (That was the major logical flaw in my story, but I was in a hurry and wanted to get the thing done!)
I was a bit sorry that I had to slaughter the poem, 'cause it has some nice parts, too. The ones I quoted, though, used to have me cringing on the floor... Do you think it's unfair towards the poet to quote only the bad parts?
You know, I find the guys' living arrangement in "Ambush" so fascinating and enticing. I always wish I could be part of it, and if it only were to do their laundry! (They must have lots of that, don't you think?!)
If you eventually get to writing the 5th chapter, why don't you work my stuff in as you see fit, and then let me have a look at it?
I gotta retire now; tomorrow is my disco-day, so I need all the sleep I can get!
My best,
Your Tom
Hi Tom
Evan told me this afternoon who you were. He had told me earlier about your trip to Austria, so I already knew about you.
I must say, I am an English professor, and I would not have known from your email and "Icy" story that English isn't your native language. Well done!
When and if I get the rest of "Dr. Tim" done, you'll see it on the list. But feel free to write me anytime with ideas or suggestions. And I promise to check back with you before I do anything with a chapter 5 if there is one.
I intended "Dr. Tim" to be a sort of throw-away story. I'm working on one for Nifty which will be more ambitious. It's about two fifty-ish men who find love. That alone will make it different from most of the Nifty stories. But these guys will be outed, probably inadvertently, and the story will deal with the problems they face in a small town in very conservative central Florida. Thus there will be political and social and moral issues along with the love story.
Actually, I'm much more interested in that than in "Dr. Tim." But Evan, whose opinion I do indeed value, thinks I should finish "Dr. Tim" before continuing with the new story.
At any rate, please stay in touch. I'm flattered that you thought my story sounded like Evan's. He's a far better writer than I'll ever be. And I love "Icy's Revenge." You and Evan have given me ideas that make it really tempting to continue "Dr. Tim" beyond the four chapters I had originally envisioned.
It's nice to have a new friend.
Best regards,
Tim
"So, lover, what do you think of our story?"
"Well, to be honest, this second part seems a bit..uhm...bland, you know?"
"Bland? BLAND?? What did you expect? Sex in the second letter? We barely knew each other then!"
"Yeah well, I know. But still, I think it lacks some spice."
"Spice, huh? Just you wait, Skippy, I'll give you SPICE!"
"Hey! Oof! What are you...mmph!"
"Shuddup, sweetcheeks. And don't bother. I'm stronger and you know it."
"You... Hey, that's my fave tee you're ripping there!"
"Tough. Lift up."
"Damn Tommy, not now! Stop that! Unggh! The guys are due...ah...at eight!"
"It's only 7:45. Turn over."
"Oh...ow! What was that for? No, please, that tickles! Shit! Hah...ooh...oh, stop! Enough! I give! He! That hurt!"
"Hurt bad?"
"Uh, no. Mmmh! Oh yes. There. Yeees. Uh! Go slow! Hey! Don't stop! Put it back in!"
"You want it?"
"Yes! Asshole!"
"And you say our story is bland?"
"Uh, no! I don't. Not bland. Oh, yes! It's uh...romantic! Wonderful! Touching! Yeah, more. More! I love our story! Fuck! Faster! Yeah, like that. Oh oh oh ooh, I'm there! I'm cummmingg!!"
"Oh fuck, oh yeah, aah!"
"Wow!"
"Yes. Wow."
"There's cum on your nose."
"And you're a mess all over... Shit! The doorbell! They're here!"
Well, folks, that was part two of our little story. Happy Valentine's Day to everybody! I like to hear from readers, so keep the e-mails coming! But better tell me nice things only, remember what happened to Tim! --Tom