Rim Shots

By Tom Tongue

Published on Nov 9, 2001

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RIM SHOTS (Part Four)

From Tom's Tongue

I'm dreaming...I'm naked, facedown, floating on a cloud. Several beautiful naked men, all of whom are caressing me with their tongues, surround me. My back, my thighs, my feet and my ass cheeks are all receiving light, sensual licks. One, more persistent than the rest, is at the top of my ass crack after taking a long dragging lap up from my balls. His hands pull my cheeks apart, and he dives again toward my sack...

I'm now wide-awake! I realize that my dream lover is real! Opening my eyes, I see that I am in my dark bedroom with only a small amount of light coming in from the hallway outside. When the tongue reaches my hole, it begins circling the rim, digging deeper every second.

"Uuuuummmmm," I sigh, "if you're the tooth fairy, you're checking out the wrong end looking for missing teeth. But don't stop looking!"

A warm, breathy sexy laugh arises from between my legs. "Hi, Tom. I knocked on the door, but obviously, you didn't hear me. The door was open, so, I let myself in, fearing a medical emergency, of course. When I found you sleeping here with your sweet ass, glowing in the dark, I couldn't resist continuing my earlier examination." He began his love-licks again.

"Doc, you can examine me there all you want, but come up here...I want to examine your mouth with my tongue!"

"Uh, maybe I should hop in the shower first. I just came from the gym and I'm..." he started.

"NO!" I surprised myself by my outburst. "I wanna taste your sweat!" I quickly turned over to see him for the first time that evening. He was smiling, his hair damp, his body shimmering in the low light. I was taken by his beauty, as he stood naked by the bed before lowering himself on top of me.

His body smelled of masculine sweat and musk. Our lips met in a passionate kiss; our tongues trying to fill every empty inch of our partner's mouth. I began running my hands across his back and ass as our hard cocks dueled for space between our muscular stomachs. A surge of desire overtook me and I rolled us over until I was on top.

I began by turning his head to the side, breathing warm air into his ear I said, "Doc, lay back and relax. I'm gonna clean up every inch of you...with my mouth." I punctuated the comment by lightly probing his ear channel with my tongue. I then began taking slow leisurely licks across his neck and shoulders, moving down to his chest. Just as I was about to reach his left nipple, I quickly lifted his arms, holding them back and dove for his sweaty armpit.

As my tongue lapped and cleaned his pit, he began moaning, "Oooh, Tommy, that feels so good...clean me up. Yeah. Lick it!"

Over the next fifteen or twenty minutes, I tongue-washed the entire front side of his body, only avoiding his crotch; I was saving the best for last. I discovered his erogenous zones by the sounds of his breathing and moans of pleasure.

As I moved up his right thigh, I could see his throbbing prick, dripping with pre-cum, begging for attention. I spread his muscular legs and buried my face in the space where his balls were resting on the bed. I inhaled deeply, savoring the aroma of his male essence. I said, directly into his ball sack, "Doc, you smell and taste so good. If we could bottle this stuff, we'd be rich!"

My own dick was dripping, but I didn't touch it, for fear I'd cum too soon. I lapped at his sack, bouncing each orb on my tongue until they began to pull up tight. I tried to suck both of them into my mouth at the same time to pull them back to a relaxed position, but they were just too big! I drew them into my mouth, one at a time, lovingly rotating my tongue around the sensitive skin.

By this time, Doc was writhing on the bed. "OH, TOMMY, MY DICK! SUCK MY DICK! PLEASE, SUCK MY DICK! I'VE GOTTA CUM!"

I immediately retreated and began blowing cool air across his entire crotch area. "Not so fast, Doc! Cool down. I still have to wash the other side." He groaned in resignation, but after a few moments seemed calmer. I took his left leg and lifted it, saying, "Time to turn over."

If Doc is gorgeous from the front, the back view is nothing short of spectacular! His head and hands were buried in the pillow, and his muscles stood out in bold relief. He has wide shoulders, an impossibly slim waist and his ass cheeks were clenching, revealing their sexy dimples -- begging for attention. Ass maven that I was rapidly becoming, I wanted to begin rimming immediately, but I held back.

Lying across his back, with my cock nestled in his crack, I whispered in his ear, "Don't you DARE cum on my bed...I have special plans for that load." Another ear probe with my tongue, and I, once again, began my downward progress. After cleaning his entire massive back, I started at the base of his spine and took a long, wiggly lick up until I reached the center of his shoulder blades and my cock was back in its nestling place. Lifting up my entire weight, I repeated this process three times getting lower in his crack and closer to his love hole each time.

"Tommy, I can't take it! I'm beggin' ya! Please! Eat my ass! EAT MY HUNGRY HOLE!"

I wasn't quite ready yet, and I wanted to prolong his pleasure as much as possible. I gave his hole a quick peck and backed away. I began with the sole of his left foot and licked and slurped my way upward, with a two or three minute detour on the back of his knee, until my cock was dripping onto his calf and my mouth was kissing, nipping and licking his left ass cheek. I repeated the process on the right side, and once I was done, had him groaning, shaking and sweating all over again.

Moving until I was flat on the bed, with my face level with his sweet ass, I said, "Oh, Doc, your ass is BEAUTIFUL. Pull those cheeks apart for me." Unlike my encounter with Joe, I wanted to take my time and savor this experience. I began by slowly blowing a warm stream of air on Doc's wrinkled pink raisin, watching it contract from the sensation. Next, I moved in with my nose and inhaled deeply. The smell was intoxicating -- earthy, sweaty and masculine.

I began to slowly run the flat of my tongue to over his crevice, enjoying the taste and texture. This act I was performing was so intimate, so deeply personal that it made me enjoy it that much more. Every taste I encountered was a delicacy. I was now ready to move on to the big show. I removed Doc's hands and said, "Tell me what you want!"

He was whimpering by this time and between breaths, he yelled, "MY ASS! EAT MY FUCKIN' ASS! PLEEEEASE! I NEED IT!! I'M DYIN' HERE!"

Happy to comply, I pulled his cheeks apart and drove my pointed tongue directly into the center of his hole. He was so ready by that time that I was able to penetrate deeply. My ears savored the lusty groans that came from above. Over his muscular cheeks, I could see him grabbing handfuls of the sheets in delirious pleasure. I was actually able to control his response. Every time my mouth organ entered his nether lips, I heard a gasping grunt.

Giving satisfaction to the Doc this way made me even more horny and frantic to bring him to an earth-shattering release. After another few minutes of tongue fucking, I pulled back and had him turn over again. This time I grabbed him behind his knees, lifted and said, "Pull you legs back, Doc...it's time to go to heaven."

When his legs were lifted knelt and pushed my knees against his upper back moving forward until my chin was in his asshole and my cock was pressing into the center of his spine. Looking him directly in the eyes, I licked my lips slowly and dropped my mouth over his hole and began frantically pumping my tongue in and out as fast as possible. I poked, prodded, wiggled and licked.

His head was now moving from side to side, "TOMMY! I'M GETTING CLOSE, MAN! I'M GONNA SHOOT! UUUGGGHHH! GONNA..."

I was approaching orgasm as well. The vibrations of his back against my cock were bringing me to the brink. Swiftly, I swallowed the head of his pulsing pole. Simultaneously, I pulled back, pointing the throbbing head of my joint at his, now dripping, hole. I intended to penetrate and cum with just the head inside as he had with me that morning, but he had other ideas.

We began our orgasms at the same moment: his into my hungry mouth and mine into his tight asshole. Doc felt my cock and cum hitting the walls of his ass, and thrust his hips downward, burying my prick into his channel, my cum lubing its way. I could feel his prostate pulse as my cock head brushed over it.

Doc was feverishly quaking. He moaned, "YEAH! DRINK MY CUM AND FILL UP MY HOT ASSHOLE. FUCK IT! FUCK MY ASS!" As our spasms subsided, I thrust in and pulled out in slow short strokes making sure to pass over his love nut every time.

I swallowed every drop of his salty sweet load and let his still rigid prick fall from my lips. I pulled his legs around my waist and lowered my mouth to his with my cock still buried in his hole. Instead of a passionate kiss, we were panting into each other's mouths breathing heavily after our exertions. My dick softened somewhat and fell from his sweet ass, which allowed me to lower his legs to the bed and fall face forward onto his chest.

Doc was the first to speak. "Man, I don't think I could tolerate that more than three or four times a day." We both laughed huskily.

I replied, "We're not done yet. I still have a mess to clean up. Sit on my face, Doc." I rolled over on my back and he knelt above my shoulders. His hole was slightly red, dilated and dripping spit and cum. When my tongue touched him, we both moaned. Although we were less frantic than before, we both enjoyed our slow sensuous after-play. As I lovingly slurped and licked him, he leaned forward and did the same to my dick -- not sucking it, but licking until my entire crotch was completely clean.

He turned back around and finally we shared a tasty kiss, sharing our juices between us. We were both satisfied and content, snuggling together for a few quiet moments.

After a few minutes, I pulled back, looked into his eyes and said, "Doc, you're not gonna believe the day I've had..." I knew I could trust him and I needed to have someone to talk to about all the changes in my life. I proceeded to tell him about the Coach and Joe, and how much I had enjoyed everything that had happened, especially getting fucked by Coach.

He made it simple for me. "Do you feel guilty about anything that's happened?"

"No, not a bit...actually, I feel really good about it."

He smiled and kissed me, "Tom, even though I haven't gone through quite what you have, this has all been a big change for me, too. I've been thinking about it all day, and before I came over here tonight I realized that I LOVED what we did this morning, and that I wanted to do it again and again. As long as we feel good, and aren't hurting anybody, why the hell should it matter who we fuck around with?"

"That's what I was thinking, too. Thanks, Doc!" As I was pulling him towards me to begin round two, the phone rang! I reached across him to grab it. "Hello..."

"So, Tommy, have you decided that you're gonna let me eat your ass?" MY OBSCENE CALLER!

I paused a moment to think. "Uh, man, I've just gotten out of the shower. Can you call me back in like five minutes?"

"Sure thing." CLICK.

"Doc, that was my obscene caller! Let's have a little fun with him, okay?"

"OKAY...maybe we can learn something!" We were both smiling.


We were kissing and rubbing our hard bodies and cocks together as we heard the phone ring. "Here we go!" I said. "Hello?" I cradled the phone so that we both could hear.

"I wish I had been there with you...I woulda dried you off with my tongue! So, have you decided? Will you sit on my face for an hour or two?" I was watching Doc's face, and his eyes widened with recognition -- he knew who my caller was!

"I dunno. I'll admit the idea intrigues me. But, I'm nervous because I don't know who you are..."

"You know me, okay? I'm just not ready to tell you who I am until you'll agree to me eating you out..."

"Tell me more about what you want to do to me. It makes my dick hard."

"To start, I'd have you move to the corner of your bed. I'd lay you face down with your legs spread wide and your cock and balls pointing south." Doc pulled me up and, in moments, I was in the described position. "That way I'd have access to everything tasty and I'd lick up and down for a while just to get you warmed up."

The Doc crouched behind me and started licking, taking long swipes from my dick head, up the shaft, over my balls, past my pulsing hole to the top of my ass crack. I moaned out loud. "Oh, that sounds hot. Yeah! Lick up and down like that. Make everything wet!"

"Oh, you're getting into it, huh?" Said my caller.

"Uh....yeah...I guess so. I'm rubbing my finger over my hole and it DOES feel good." Doc came back up, lying across my back with his throbbing cock on my ass. He moved to listen again. "So...tell me what else are you gonna do?"

"I'm gonna lay on the bed and hang my head over the edge," Doc was already moving, "and have you drop that sweet hole right on my face so that you can drag your entire crack up and down on my tongue."

I moved quickly. "OH, THAT'S GOOD, TOO! EAT IT! LICK IT MAN! Uhm...that one sounds really good too! It really is getting me hot!"

The caller said, "Come on, man...you know you want it. Agree to meet with me!"

Doc had moved back to listen, hearing the request, looked me in the eyes, smiled and nodded. I said, "Okay, I'll meet you. Where and when?"

"GREAT! I'm going to check into the Holiday Inn out on Route 53 tomorrow night under the name Zachary Smith. Call around nine o'clock and I'll give you my room number. OH, I can't wait! I'm gonna fill your ass with my spit, AND SUCK IT RIGHT BACK OUT AGAIN!"

Doc was moving again. I said, "Okay...see you tomorrow night."

He added, "And wear your oldest jock too, okay?"

"Okay...bye." I hung up.

Doc was sitting on the edge of the bed, stroking his ten-inch tool. "That was soooo hot! Get up here, put your feet on either side of me so that sweet butt is right in my face." I moved into position and he grabbed my hips pulling my ass directly onto his hot tongue.

"Oh, yeah, Doc. GET IT WET! I WANNA SIT ON YOUR DICK, DOC! WET IT DOWN GOOD! LIKE THAT - IT FEELS SOOOO GOOD!" I could feel and hear him snorting, spitting and slurping. The call and the Doc's foreplay had me so hot; I had to ride on his beautiful piece. Slowly, I began crouching, rubbing my ass and hanging balls down his chest and stomach until my hole came to rest against his the head of his hot and huge hard on! I slowly lowered myself, inch by inch, until I was fully impaled. I lifted myself until just the head was inside me and paused a moment. I took a deep breath and dropped my full weight onto Doc's lap. We both groaned.

I began to bounce, and Doc panted into my ear, "Slow down, Tom! Let's not rush. It feels too good to hurry. Give me three strokes and stand back up again."

I slowly moved up and down his pole three times, twisting my hips every time I reached his pubes and then stood back up. The Doc immediately attacked my asshole with his mouth and tongue. The sensations were more intense because my hole was more sensitive and stretched.

Each time I sat back down on his throbbing pecker, my strokes began to speed up, and every time I stood again, it seemed his tongue was getting deeper inside me. Once again, I couldn't hold out. I stood and moved onto the bed on all fours. Looking over my shoulder, I yelled, "COME ON, DOC! FUCK ME! PILEDRIVE MY ASS!"

Seconds later, he was fully inside me, and his dick was pummeling my prostate gland. We were both panting and grunting. The wet sounds of flesh meeting flesh filled my bedroom. Doc began to chant, "FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK..."

I had reached the point of no return. "DOC! KEEP FUCKING ME! I'M GONNA CUM!"

"ME TOO! HERE IT CUMS!" For the second time that day, I felt blazing hot spurts blasting across my prostate setting me off to another massive orgasm. Doc reached around my body and used his right hand to catch my spooge as it flew from my dick head.

Exhausted, we fell forward onto the bed, his dick still buried in my thoroughly fucked hole. Slowly, he pulled back, withdrew his cock, and, instead of his usual complete cleanup, he lightly kissed my dilated ass lips, quickly darting out his tongue for a brief taste.

He collapsed on his back beside me. I crawled over his chest and began kissing him, sharing the tastes of our latest encounter. He took his right hand, filled with my come, reached down and began stroking my ass cheeks, rubbing the fluid into my skin.

Our kisses tapered off and I lay my head on his shoulder, looking deeply into his beautiful blue eyes. "Wow, Doc. I don't know how it could get any better than that! But I'm willing to keep practicing until we do!" We both laughed lightly.

"I second that emotion." He leaned down and kissed my forehead.

I took my right hand and began tracing his nipples, until I remembered! "HEY, DOC! You know who my obscene caller is, don't you?"

"Let's just say, I have a pretty good idea..." He smiled.

"WELL? Who is it?"

He thought a moment. "Tom, I'm not 100% sure, but I'll tell you what...I'm gonna go to the hotel with you tomorrow night, just to be on the safe side. I WILL tell you this: if it's who I think it is, we're gonna have some fun with him, that's for sure!"

"Can't you give me a clue? He says I know him."

"Nope! It's too good a surprise to spoil. Now, it's late and it's been a LONG day. Can I sleep here with you tonight?"

"You bet! I might even give you a "tooth fairy" wake-up call myself!" I quickly jumped up, ran downstairs to make sure the doors were locked and the lights were out.

I climbed into bed with my gorgeous doctor. We snuggled up together, kissed again, and were both sleeping within minutes. I was more content than I'd been in a long time.

What a day!

(To be continued)

Next: Chapter 5


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