Part # 6 "Patience Rewarded"
This is my first attempt to write a story to achieve a long-felt ambition. I had read some erotic pieces before, and some were very good indeed. Still I wanted see if I could reach out with just words and achieve the desired effect. Which of course, is turning you on!
The very first story I wrote was published some months ago. It was called "Joan and I " That story became a Chapter in this much longer story which I'm now trying to break up into chapters or parts. I would love to know if I had my desired effect. This story describes about six months in the sexual transformation of a teenager as she discovers her powerful sexuality. While it focuses on Lesbian relationships, there are some graphic (F/m) parts. What can I say, it's my life. It's very much taken from life. I guess you might say it's mostly a true story. If this kind of story is problem for you go no further. leila113@lycos.com Central characters - Molly, a 16 year old. Allison, the friend and mother she baby sits for, and other friends and lovers. Leila Benson
Part # 6
I was actually trembling when I reached my room. I realized that I had left my shorts and panties on the floor of the living room and had a towel wrapped around me. I felt the cool evening air on the damp between my legs and in general felt shaky from what I had just witnessed. I took the towel and carefully wiped myself, washed somewhat, brushed my teeth and put on my sleep top. Actually, a big old hand me down cotton short sleeve shirt of my dad's. I had two of these shirts which I treasured. They had been laundered so many times that they were wonderfully soft and comfy. This shirt came down to almost my knees and was my favorite "nightgown". I put on a little light on the bureau, turned the light out by the bed and jumped in. I was lying there listening intently for Lin to come to "tuck me in'. I could here their voices murmuring from the kitchen. I was beginning to fantasize having Lin make love to me and had begun to drift deeply into my own thoughts when I realized that someone was standing over me. I opened my eyes and there was Lin. "I thought you might have fallen asleep. I didn't want to wake you. You looked so sweet lying there. I was just beginning to feel badly that maybe I had waited to long to tuck you in." She said this while brushing my hair with her soft hand. I was in heaven. " I'll sit here". She said as she sat on the edge of the bed. " How was that experience for you, Molly? For me, it was very much like Allison's. Knowing you were watching made it even better. I hope that it was all right for you?" I told her that it was "extraordinary," something I could never have imagined having such an effect on me, and that I was still trembling a little from the experience of watching them and waiting for her to come to my room. "Here, sit up a little. Lean against me. That's good. " I moved up to lay my back against her. I was super sensitive to every tactile sensation. The feel of Lin against my back. The heat of her body. Her hardened nipples touching my shoulder blade. She bent down slightly and smelled my hair. I inhaled with her. Her odor was rich and sweet. I swore I could smell the sexuality of her body. She began to gently kiss my hair then the side of my face, moving toward my mouth. I turned towards her with my mouth open. She enveloped me with her lips, and then she shot her tongue into my open mouth. I returned the thrusts of her full lips and probing tongue. I was leaning and also turned towards her. It was an awkward position and I was out of breath. Lin began to play with my face. Running her fingers along my lips, then my eyebrows. Along the opening of my ears. It felt heavenly. Just as I was leaning towards her delicate tracing of the erotic parts of my face, she stopped and removed her hands. A moment latter, like an electric shock, her palms brushed my nipples. It was amazing. It was if my nipples were directly in touch with my clitoris. My excitement reached another dimension. My heart, which already was pounding, leapt to my vagina. I heard myself sigh and let out a low moan. "Oh Lin, please, I need you, please help me, please." Lin let her other hand slide along my stomach. I could feel my whole body tense as her hand reached the end of the nightshirt and slowly raised it upward. I felt myself opening like a flower. I first raised my knees, then let my legs move apart. I could feel the cool air on my moist pussy, and then her warm fingers began to trace a line from my ass crack to my upper mound. She then began to play with my outer lips; she placed a tip of her finger inside me. It was another jolt. I found my hips arching to allow her finger to go in deeper. She took the wet finger out and began to play with my clit. She kept wetting her fingers inside me as she continued to play with my tender bud. She was moving faster and faster and I was gyrating on her moving fingers. I then started to cum. I felt it well up in me in a giant spasm. At that moment, she thrust her fingers deep inside me and with her, other hand pulled my nipple. I now was having convulsion after convulsion. I kept saying to Lin, "don't stop, don't stop, more please, please don't stop." I was frightened she would end before I was finished. She continued to get me off as she whispered. "It's ok, let it go, let me have it." I came over and over. Finally, they began to slow down. Lin gently continued to hold me softly while she just barely continued to gently stroke my outer lips. I could feel the orgasms diminish gradually, then disappear, to be replaced by a powerful sense of well being, love and sleepy exhaustion. Lin kissed me gently, and asked me, "ready to be tucked in?" I was already half asleep, when she pulled my nightshirt down fluffed my pillow, then lowered me down. I literally think I was fast asleep before my head hit the pillow.
I slept through the night. I was awakened to find Cindy crawling into my bed. The alarm clock showed it was a little after eight am. It was another lovely day the sun was streaming through the window. Cindy was trying to be careful not to wake me. I pretended to be asleep. I watched her though the slits of my closed eyes. She was a perfect combination of her father and mother. She had Mark's darker coloring and eyes with Allison's beautifully delicate features. She also had a sweet and bright personality that was never manipulative, just straightforward and humorous. Altogether a great kid! While she was watching me intently, I slowly began to stick my tongue out. She was fascinated. Then I began to wiggle my nose. She still did not get it. I began to move my head in a circle. At that point, I was starting to laugh, and could barely hold it in. Cindy finally got it! She shrieked as I grabbed her and began to tickle her. We played at some roughhouse for awhile. I finally threw her off me, got up rushed into the bathroom to shower and get ready for another great day.