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Plethora of A/Ns in this chapter. Sorry
(Author's note = A/N ) Please RE-READ MY CELEBRITY sexuality clause that I will repost just so I cannot be sued by anyone... and remember that this is JUST A STORY! This story is fiction and is not intended to imply anything about the true sexuality of the celebrities mentioned or any personal knowledge about their private lives. (I will repost this multiple times so that there isn't confusion)
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- Sleep deprived state... Yay, I get to worry about finding a place to stay for college. Fun.
Last time on Psych....
"It's fine Adam." Shawn interrupted, "We can talk about it tomorrow... for now, we need to get some sleep or we'll never get to the stage in time for your rehearsal." Adam sighed and smiled at Shawn, "Will you at least sleep in the bed with me? It's a King-size... we might not even know we're in the same bed." Shawn smiled and said, "I think it's best if we had separate arrangements." Shawn stood and made his way to the couch, Adam made a fake sad face and said, "Spoilsport." Shawn chuckled at Adam and turned off the light, using the pillow and blanket he had grabbed from the bed as his bedding. "Shawn?" came Adam's voice from the giant bed. "Yeah Adam?" "Thank you." Shawn smiled as he fell into a peaceful, dreamless night's sleep.
A/N -This story is fiction and is not intended to imply anything about the true sexuality of the celebrities mentioned or any personal knowledge about their private lives.
Shawn felt his sleep penetrated by the soft buzz of his cell phone vibrating. He sat up and looked at the text, Juliet's face smiled at him. <Hey Shawn! Hope you slept well. ;) Lassiter wants to know if Mr. Levine is up yet. And if he should head over... we're at the station.> Shawn yawned and rubbed his eyes, it was 9:00am. He looked over at the bed and saw that Adam was still asleep, his chest left uncovered and his tattoos showing. <He's not up yet Jules. I told Lassie I'd text him as soon as Adam woke up. But I do have a favor to ask.> <What's that?> <Can we get a non-hotel made breakfast? I'm hungry and I'm pretty sure Adam will want something more upscale. Can you make that happen?> <I'll ask the Chief, but I think so.> Shawn stood up and walking on the balls of his feet, quietly made his way next to the bed, not rousing the singer. He silenced his phone and began a quick search of the singer's personal possessions for clues in the case. Not much, poor guy doesn't have many things to remind him of home. Shawn saw a few photos from concerts and a cell phone, He quickly scrolled the contacts and recent texts. Nothing interesting. Shawn heard the singer rustle and he quickly put the items back in their original places. Adam rolled to the side of the bed where Shawn was standing and his hand flailed outward, catching the psychic's arm. The singer's hand grabbed his arm and pulled him onto the bed. Shawn wasn't sure if Adam was still sleeping or not but if he didn't wake soon, Shawn was going to crash into him or move the bed too much. Shawn braced his hand on the bed and pivoted over the singer, extending a leg to muffle his movements, and landed gently on the other side of Adam, who was face first in the pillows. Shawn pulled his hand loose and looked at the still body of the singer, it was well muscled and tattooed. Shawn found his hand tracing the tattoos that covered a large portion of the pop star's chest and back. Adam responded by giving a soft rumble, which Shawn enjoyed. The psychic continued his gentle touching until Adam rolled slightly away from Shawn, his front facing Shawn's face. Shawn drank in the sight, Adam had large biceps and a strong jaw, which was sporting a five o'clock shadow. His pectoral muscles were perfect and Adam's six pack was easily seen by anyone who looked at him, whether or not he wore a shirt.
Adam's eyes wearily blinked open, as his eyes met with Shawn's gaze, a small smile that made Shawn feel warm and giddy played at Adam's lips. Adam's left hand reached out to touch Shawn's cheek, cradling it softly. Unsure of how he felt, Shawn hesitated as the singers hand gently caressed him. Sensing the tension, Adam move closer to Shawn and pulled the psychic in close to his muscled body. "Can I kiss you?" Shawn was slightly surprised, he thought that Adam would just go for a kiss, but he was asking. Shawn nodded and Adam moved his head close, his eyes moving between Shawn's eyes and his lips. When he was inches from the other man's face his eyes closed and Shawn moved in. Shawn felt his whole mind come alive from the kiss, his hands wrapped around Adam's svelte body and pulled him even closer. When Adam broke the kiss, he moved his head to the crook of Shawn's neck and breathed deeply. Shawn began to kiss the side of Adam's throat, feeling the pulse of the singer race as Shawn's lips brushed ever so gently against his skin. Shawn felt Adam's cock begin to come to life. He didn't want to have sex with Adam yet, but he certainly didn't want to stop kissing him. "Can we keep kissing or will a certain visitor make that too difficult?" He emphasized 'visitor' and his hand moved slightly down Adam's back. Adam thrilled at Shawn's touch and he moaned into Shawn's neck. Shawn's hand which had worked their way down to the singer's hips to where his boxers had started to tent from the 'visitor.' Unfortunately, Shawn's body decided at that moment to also send a 'visitor,' causing Shawn's jeans to rub against his cock. Shawn's jeans were so tight that his erection was crushed against the unyielding denim fabric. Adam had no idea that Shawn was having a similar issue and the psychic could not decide if he could sleep with Adam, not sure of the future consequences. Every fiber of his being was screaming 'Fuck him!' but a tiny part of him wanted to wait for Lassiter. Adam had begun to slowly thrust his hips into Shawn's leg, wanting contact and wanting Shawn.
Shawn moved himself away from Adam and said, "Adam, I really like you. But I'm not sure what it would mean if we..." Adam looked into Shawn's eyes and saw the apprehension and nervousness. He pulled Shawn in for another kiss and said, as their lips parted, "It would mean that I think you are very special Shawn. But I remember that you mentioned someone else. If you want to wait for them..." "I don't know if they'll come around. I don't want to wait for the rest of my life, hoping that they'll notice me." "They'd be crazy to turn someone like you down Shawn." "Ok Adam... what if we were to... says awkwardly continue? If I later found out that they cared for me. What would happen with us?" Adam looked thoughtful and finally he said, "I'm not sure Shawn. I haven't really met anyone like you before. You are truly kind and genuine. You don't seem as obsessed over my celebrity status as my past... ummm... 'lovers' were." Shawn said, "How about this... for right now we can just... kinda... lamely finishes do it and if something comes up we can talk about it then. After all, you'll have to leave the city eventually and I can't leave all of my friends and family. Also I know that you tend to like a certain image-" "Okay Shawn. I think that for now we can just explore one another. No commitments." Shawn nodded and then he snuck a quick kiss onto Adam's lips.
Adam grunted at Shawn as their bodies moved closer. "Just so you know... I haven't... ever..." His voice trailed off. Adam's erection seemed to strain against his boxers and Adam's voice came out uneven, "Oh. That's okay Shawn." He looked like he didn't mind at all. Shawn kissed Adam's neck again, causing the singer to gulp and his chest to heave. Shawn experimentally gently bit down on the other man's neck, making Adam pant and moan. Shawn's hand, which was still at the star's hip, moved down to Adam's cock, which had managed to get through the hole in the front of his boxers. Adam hadn't noticed the rogue hand until Shawn had a firm grasp of the singer's manhood. Adam's hips bucked and he said, "Holy Shit! Sh-Shawn... if you... I'm gonna..." He looked ready to burst. His eyes had gotten both wide and intense as Shawn had grabbed hold. Shawn leaned in and said, "Can I...?" He wasn't sure how to phrase it... fuck you sounds so rude, Shawn thought. Adam looked at him quizzically. Shawn grinned and said, "Can I scratch your itch?" He hoped that sounded sexy or at least funny. Adam chucked and said, "Hmmmm. I don't know if I've ever been asked like that." Shawn's hand began to stroke Adam, which caused him to say, "mmmmmm... oh yes! Oh Shawn... writhing in pleasure YES! There is definitely something you can... UGH... do to me!" His breathlessness made Shawn so hard that even the jeans couldn't disguise his erection. Adam looked down. in an aggressive voice "Oh yeah Shawn! You want me badly, don't you?" Shawn said in a husky voice, "God yes." Adam rolled to the edge of the bed and opened a drawer, grabbing a bottle of lube and a couple of condoms. As he sat up to hand the items to Shawn, Shawn grabbed the items and shoved the singer forcefully to the bed. This is my show, thought Shawn. He pulled the boxers off of Adam, put some lube on his hand and began to stroke Adam. Adam's expression went from shock to bliss as he felt Shawn's hand rubbing his hard cock. Shawn's left hand moved to his own jeans and began to unbutton his pants, unzipping the zipper slowly. Adam watched, completely transfixed, as Shawn stripped off his shirt and took his pants off. Shawn's hard-on was sticking straight out from his own boxers. Before he gets to see me, I want him good and worked up, Shawn thought. Shawn continued to jerk off Adam, then his left hand took over the job and his right hand pulling on Adam's back, causing the singer's ass move towards Shawn. "Pillows" Grunted Adam, grabbing a few and putting them under his spine, raising his ass higher so that Shawn could access it better. Shawn looked at Adam's perfect ass, so smooth and soft, with a light dusting of hair. Shawn wasn't one-hundred percent sure what to do... not having this in his sex repertoire with women. He applied some lube to his finger and began to massage Adam's hole, his left hand returning to Adam's extremely hard dick. Adam's breathing was Shawn's indicator, as his finger gently slipped inside of the stud, he heard Adam breath catch. Shawn began to move his finger in and out, slowly at first, then steadily building. Adam's breathing synced with the thrusts and his cock pulsed from the touch. Shawn applied yet more lube and added a second finger, going slowly until Adam began to thrust into Shawn's fingers and pant hard. Adding a third finger, Shawn figured that Adam would be, hopeful, prepared for Shawn's cock, which was leaking precum onto his boxers, causing a damp spot to form. Removing all of his fingers, much to Adam's dismay, Shawn put one finger back in and felt around until he heard Adam gasp and moan. "Oh, god! Right THERE! Again!" Shawn rubbed the small area again and Adam's legs shook and he looked at Shawn, "Oh man... I need that cock right now!" Shawn pulled out his throbbing cock and put on the condom, rubbing lube on it to ease the entrance. As he positioned himself behind Adam, Shawn looked down and saw Adam looking at him with hunger, that same hunger he had the previous night. Shawn gently pushed himself in and Adam let out a moan that nearly made Shawn come in the condom. He moved slowly in and let Adam get used to his size. Once he was all the way in, Shawn pulled himself almost the whole way out and pushed back in, keeping an eye on Adam to see if there was any discomfort on his face. Adam's grunts of pleasure fueled Shawn's aggression and speed. Soon he was slamming into the singer's ass, each time he felt his hard cock brush the area in Adam's ass, Adam's eyes lost focus and he let out a short exclamation of joy. "Oh fuck... so fucking good! emphatically grunting oh, YES!" Soon Shawn felt his orgasm building in his stomach, but he was determined not to come before Adam. Adam's phrases got shorter and shorter until he was only making grunts and moans every few seconds. He said, "Shawn... close." Was all he could manage. Shawn angled his cock so that it scraped Adam's prostate, Shawn grabbed Adam's cock and began to tease the head, and Adam let out a series of short grunts as he came, "Oh... UH! gonnagonna-shitshitshit... oh fuck!" Adam's cock throbbed in Shawn's hand and then erupted as a volley of hot come shot out of him. Shawn continued to stroke Adam's cock and he felt his own orgasm take over. He came inside the condom in Adam's ass and gently pulled himself out. Adam sat up and wrapped his hands around Shawn's neck, kissing him on the lips. As they came down Adam said, "That was incredible! I can't remember when I felt this great!" Shawn smiled and said, "so much better than cable or HBO right?" Adam laughed and said, "Maybe even those great shows on USA... right?" The two laughed.
Ten minutes later, and many, many jokes later, Adam suggestively said, "You know... I have to have sex twice in a row. It's part of my lucky ritual before a concert." Shawn's eyes rose and he said, "What did you have in mind?" He felt himself begin to rouse at the thought of having sex with the star again. He was sure that Adam would think that Shawn's first time was not as good as someone more experienced. His behavior seemed to suggest otherwise. This time Adam moved next to Shawn and put his hands on Shawn's waist. He pulled Shawn close and whispered, "My turn?" Shawn felt a shiver pass through his body at the thought of Adam's enormous dick sliding in and out of him. He felt a little uneasy about it, not sure if Adam would be easy on him. Finally Shawn said, "As long as you don't mind taking time to... prepare me for grabs Adam's half erect cock this beast." Adam's eyes darkened and his demeanor became more masculine and powerful. Shawn was surprised at how fucking sexy Adam right now. "You are so incredibly handsome." Shawn felt a little silly saying it. Adam gave Shawn a smile and he said, "Shawn I don't think anyone would say anything else to you either. You have got a great body and a heart-melting smile." Shawn smiled and Adam pointed at Shawn's face, smiling. Adam let Shawn sit on the edge of the bed so that he could easily reposition if he was uncomfortable. Adam put all of the pillows under Shawn, making him feel like he was floating on water. Adam looked down at Shawn's steadily hardening dick and he slowly moved his mouth down to meet it. Shawn breath caught in his throat as he experienced Adam's mouth. Adam's tongue teased Shawn's head as Shawn lolled back as he relished the feeling of Adam's hot and wet lips around his shaft. Adam quickly pulled out a condom and lube. He then set them on the bed next to Shawn and lifted up Shawn's perfectly round ass. Then Adam moved in close and began to lick Shawn's ass, which made Shawn suck in air and loose it in a whoosh. Adam continued to tease Shawn's asshole until Shawn whimpered and said, "Adam... can you... continue. I'm having trouble not losing it." Adam grinned and said, "Enjoying it?" Shawn nodded. Adam obliged Shawn and began to apply lube to his fingers. He went very slowly at first, letting Shawn acclimate to each new finger, until Shawn began to push back into Adam's thrusts. Finally Adam said, "Are you ready Shawn? It's gonna be a little painful at first." Shawn swallowed nervously but nodded. Adam put on the condom and put on a lot of lube. Then he began to gradually slide into Shawn's heat. As he cleared Shawn's ring, both he and Shawn let out different sounds, Shawn let out a slightly pained moan, Adam let out a groan of pleasure as he felt Shawn's tight hole trying to crush his cock. Adam waited a minute before entering slowly. Halfway in, Adam stopped again making sure that Shawn was comfortable. Shawn felt like Adam's rod was going to poke his stomach if he went in much further, but the feeling was nice once the pain edged away. He nodded to Adam, for him to continue. When Adam was all the way in he leaned down and kissed Shawn on his lips, gently pulling back slightly and sliding forward again. Shawn felt a slight twinge but ignored it and started to tell Adam that he was okay. Adam pulled partway out and pushed back in and Shawn felt the pain evaporate as he began to feel his cock twitch and leak from the wonderful feeling he was experiencing. Adam started to increase the speed and as he pulled nearly all of the way out of Shawn he heard Shawn let out a moan of sadness. Adam shifted his weight and pushed back in, his thick cock rubbing against Shawn's prostate. Shawn yelped as he felt the nerves light up in ecstasy. Shawn nodded as if to say, 'again!' Adam did the same motion and Shawn nearly came as he felt the wonderful sensation a second time. "Gonna... if you..." He could barely form words, much less sentences. Adam smirked and said, "What if I want you to...?" He mocked Shawn and pulled himself nearly out. Shawn couldn't think, he was too close. One more thrust and he would come undone. As Adam was about to thrust Shawn clenched his ass tight. Adam swore and said, "HOLY FUCK you are so fucking tight! You gonna make me come!" Shawn returned the smirk and said, "What if I want you to come?" Shawn pointed at Adam, his face was saying 'I dare you.' The two acted at the same time, Adam scraped his rod against Shawn's prostate as Shawn clenched his muscles tight. As soon as Shawn felt Adam stab into his prostate, he lost all coherent thought and felt himself sit up from the force of the orgasm. His hot come sprayed between Adam's chest and his own. As Shawn shot, his ass contracted again causing Adam to forcefully come in Shawn's ass. Thankfully the condom he had put on contained almost all of the hot jizz... some was leaking down the base of the condom and running into the sheets. Shawn had put his head against Adam's chest and he listened to Adam's heartbeat as he came down and tried to regain some semblance of control. "Shawn... you are just... incredible."
While Adam was taking a shower, he had offered to share but Shawn said he needed to make a call, Shawn called Juliet and told her that they were hungry and Shawn put in an order. Juliet heard a smile in Shawn's voice and she said, "Someone got just what they needed I'm guessing." Shawn laughed and said in an imitation of GUs' voice, "You know that's..." He stopped when he realized his friend hadn't called him back yet. "He'll come around Shawn." Juliet seemed to sense what Shawn was thinking. "I just wish I could share how happy I am with him, Jules... Anyway, I'll text you a blank message when we get ready to leave. And thanks for setting up our food for us." Shawn hung up as Adam came out of the shower. Shawn turned to him. "Breakfast is on its way. Not hotel food. I hope that's not a disappointment." Adam sighed, "Shawn, you should know how much I want my overly dry oat-bran muffin and runny eggs. Aren't you supposed to be psychic?" His voice was mock-sad. Shawn returned the tone, "I'm soooo sorry Mr. Levine, how could I be so presumptuous? Fifty lashes for me." The two broke into chuckles and heard a knock at the door. Shawn checked the peephole and saw McNabb dressed as a waiter. Shawn opened the door and said, "Hello sir! You can set the food right at the table." McNabb grinned and rolled the trolley over. Adam commented, "You are an awfully big guy for that small cart." Adam did not seem to recognize McNabb. Shawn said matter-of-factly, "He was sent over to guard the food as it was transported. I didn't want anyone trying to poison you or me." Adam nodded, suddenly the events of yesterday seemed to dawn on him and he sat down hard at the table. Shawn walked over to McNabb and handed him a twenty dollar bill. "Thank you very much... looking at McNabb's nametag Buzz." Buzz brightened at the bill and said, "Thank you very much sir! Have a great day!" He then left the room. Shawn looked at the meal and saw two police short range bugs, either Lassie was next door or another officer was. They were keeping close tabs on Adam Levine.
Shawn and Adam ate their food in silence, partially because Shawn showed Adam the bugs and as they were about to leave Shawn said, "So we're heading to the set right?" Shawn then mouthed, 'say "yes."' to Adam. "Yeah. We can check the catwalk for clues." Shawn gave him the thumbs up and the two made their way out of the building and Shawn sent the blank text to Juliet. As they waited for the elevator, Shawn sent the message <Jules... not for Lassie to know...> <Yes?> <We're actually heading to the bands storage area for clues... but if you can dust the catwalk for prints it would help. Please don't follow.> <I don't know if that's a good idea Shawn...> <Fine. Give us ten minutes before you tell Lassie okay?> Shawn got into the rental and said, "Okay the police will be waiting at the concert hall, so while they wait, we're going to check out the band and crews storage warehouse that you guys rented when you came into town." Adam nodded and said, "What do you think we'll find?" "Not sure... something that can help prove you are innocent thought." "Thank you Shawn. Most of the other people I know would either only help me if I offered them money, or if they knew it could make them famous. adding hastily I will still be paying you for your psychic services! I just... people aren't usually nice to me for no reason. Usually they want something." His voice was soft and sad. This guy doesn't really get many true friends, Shawn thought. He's so nice, that sucks!
As the two parked on a side street they sneaked to the side of a building adjacent to the warehouse. Shawn spotted an old telephone-pole ladder and he grabbed it, remembering from the warehouse photos that all of the windows were about three stories up. Shawn put the ladder against the side of the building and started to climb. Adam braced the ladder and kept a watchful eye on the surrounding alleys. Shawn tried to look in the windows. Filthy, thought Shawn as he rubbed his sleeve against the window. He peered in and saw a bunch of crates labeled with the Maroon 5 insignia. "Adam..." Shawn whispered, "Where was your last concert?" "New York City." "Okay... before that?" "Columbia. But it was just a one night show. We flew back on a private jet the same night. Why?" Shawn put his fingers to his head, "I'm getting a strong psychic vibration about some of the crates in this warehouse... I need you to give the police permission to-" His voice was cut off by the sound of a gun firing. The bullet whizzed past Shawn and dinged off of the side of the building. "RUN!" Shawn shouted to Adam, who took off. He cast a desperate glance back at Shawn as he rounded a corner. Shawn knew Adam was safe. He tried to turn and face the gunman but nearly fell off the ladder. He stopped moving as the gunman approached. Oh crap! I'm screwed. A shot rang out and Shawn waited for the searing pain. But nothing came, instead he felt the ladder slowly sliding out from under him. Shawn grasped for the window ledge and managed to grab hold as the ladder fell away. The gunman grabbed the ladder and moved it far away, making it look like it fell away. He then followed the path Adam took. He wants it to look like an accident, thought Shawn. His grip was slowly fading and he cries out, "HELP!!! I'm up here!" Hearing nothing he desperately tries to hold on.
After a few minutes Shawn feels his muscles start to falter and he nearly falls. It's not long now, thought Shawn. Adam was probably too far away to help Shawn, fleeing the masked gunman. I wish Gus was here! He'd be able to get me down. His fingers begin to slide, I wish I wasn't so indecisive about Carlton, or Adam. I didn't take the risk with Lassiter and I should have. With Adam, I was trying to keep him at arm's length so that I didn't fall for him and lose myself in a person who I can't have a real relationship with. As his fingertips begin to lose their grip he smiles to himself in an accepting way. Hey, at least Gus and Jules know now! I told someone! I told two people. His fingers slide off the wall completely and he begins a freefall towards the ground. His hands brush the wall, trying to get some traction to slow his tumble. Suddenly he feels two strong arms grab him from his descent, a few feet before he hits the ground and the force of the grab leaves Shawn breathless. Shawn feels the other person's body fall backwards to the ground, landing on their seat. Shawn, who hasn't lost all of his momentum feels his head smack into the pavement. His vision swims and he looks into the face of Carlton Lassiter, "You heard me Lassie?" His voice sounded strange, almost desperate as if his mind wasn't sure he was alive. Shawn's eyes close as pain radiates through his head. The pain is so intense he can't open his eyes, but he feels the cool trickle of blood running down the back of his head and slowly down his neck. Shawn tries to open his eyes, only to have the sunlight blind him and cause his head to explode in unfathomable torture. Shawn feels consciousness begin to slip away and he forces his eyes open. He looks into Lassiter's icy blue eyes which are wide with fear. Carlton sees the blood and that Shawn cannot seem to keep his eyes open, telltale signs of a major brain contusion. He feels his pulse race as he tries to think of some way to help Shawn. Nothing comes. Shawn pants a little as his breath slowly returns. Lassiter breathes in relief and Shawn's eyes stay locked on Lassiter, every so often they move to his mouth. Shawn's brain, addled as it was, was still sending one signal to all of Shawn's body, 'kiss Lassiter! Kiss him damn it!' But no muscles will respond. Lassiter sees Shawn's expression, it looks like desire. Lassiter falters, Shawn is looking directly into Lassie's eyes, unblinking. Lassiter feels something strange come over him as Shawn's eyes begin to lose focus and his eyelids droop shut. Shawn feels consciousness slip away just as Lassiter calls for an ambulance and he lifts Shawn into a cradle carry and begins to move quickly towards the main road.
A/N - Okay so, this counts as two chapters as well, scoffs I mean really, TWO sex scenes (kinda). So Lassie notices his own feelings a little. (yay) BUT, Shawn also has Adam, who may or may not... don't want to give away too much, be harboring feelings towards Shawn. This is your opportunity to affect the story's path. Should Shawn have something (in a more long term sense) with Adam before the case is solved and Lassie confesses? If yes, will it have an impact on the Shawn/Lassie relationship? (Would lassie worry about Shawn straying? or not? why?) Ultimately, I want our two protagonists to have their happily ever after, but I kinda feel bad for bringing in Adam and then just writing him out. (But he's gotta tour other places and if soooo incredibly sexy) So unless there is a huge kerfuffle (argues yes that is a word) and Shawn leaves, Adam is going to not remain in the story after the case is solved. I want to pick your brain. I might use your idea (in whole or in part) and will definitely give credit where it is due. Thanks for being awesome readers and loyal fans. I appreciate all of the feedback I have received.
- okay that last comment was written before the whole sex thing... whatever. Anywho, I hope you enjoyed the chapter! It's harder to write comedy after two people have had sex. It's a different mindset for both. (Comedy to sex = easy, but the other way is no pun intended harder) Please comment. I enjoy hearing what you think. Also I wrote a kind of chapter summary for this chapter, not a ton... just where it was headed and how I wanted it to sound. If you think this chapter (post sex scene... which was kind of a surprise for me too) was written well or poorly please let me know. Sometimes I think I write better spontaneously... other times it's easier to write out a general idea and then focus on details. As always, you guys who send me comments rock and help me better my writing as well as fuel my creative imagination.
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I just wanted to let you know that I have two other stories on nifty. "Merlin" and "Chuck" so if you enjoy this story feel free to read the other two (also in celeb. section). I appreciate and greatly enjoy comments (the good, the bad, and the ugly) so please, even if you hated this story or want to say hey, shoot me an email. I am completely chill and confidential. Your comments let me know that there are people reading the story and inspire me to write more. Even if you just want to correct something, I don't mind at all. By the way my stories usually don't start with sex... I gotta keep the story flowing. But expect some more sex in future chapters. Oh and if you haven't watched Psych... I'd suggest it. Or just look up James Roday. drools