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What A Vision
After being stuck in jail for 6 days I was finally on my way home. The drive from Fresno to Visalia was a bitch usually but the 45 minutes just flew. I couldn't stop thinking about Jackie, I had actually kissed her and she kissed me back, sweet! But, now I was out of jail and she wasn't. I didn't even know how long she would be in there for because her sentencing court date was still like a month away. I tried not to think about her anymore, I just wanted to be home. As I turned left into the cul de sac I lived in and was caught off guard.
"What the hell" I said out loud to myself. "Why the hell are there so many cars in the cul de sac?" I wondered again. All the cars were parked around our driveway. I thought of the date and then it all made sense. "It's Margar's 30th birthday and they're having a party for her." I kept talking to myself haha. The garage door was half way down so I just ducked underneath and headed to the door. It hella smelled like some bomb as bud in the garage. "Can't wait to hit that" I joked to myself some more as I twisted the doorknob and walked in through the washroom towards the kitchen.
"What the Fuck? You're out? Fucking Sweet!" is the first thing I heard from my friend Chato, he's my brother's friend, more like an older brother type. Anyway, he put out his hand to give me a handshake. "What's up Homeboy Sara? How was the pin?" I just laughed, called him a tard and went to look for my brother and Margar. There were people everywhere, friends I hadn't seen in a long ass minute, all for the birthday party. I can't believe I almost missed it. I finally found Elliott and Margar, they were in the back yard sitting around the fire pit.
"Happy Birthday Beezy!!!" I yelled out loud as I walked up to the pair.
Elliott jumped up, "I knew you were getting out tonight. I checked online to see when your release date was." He explained.
" Right on, I was tripping the fuck out when I turned the corner haha." I told them.
"I was hoping you'd make it home tonight." Margar yelled over the music in the background. "Guess what?" she asked.
"Huh?" I tried to say as I was taking my first blunt hit in 6 days.
"I'm pregnant!" she blurted out.
"What?!!" I asked as I let out the biggest rip ever and started coughing like a little pansy. "You're pregnant? You just had a kid haha, Abby's not even a year yet, slut!" I joked and laughed and coughed some more. "That's an awesome birthday present." I told Elliott as I passed him back the blunt.
"I know right. That's what I said" He joked as he took another hit.
"So how was jail dude, for real?" Elliott asked seriously this time. "I'm still alive aren't I, I mean come on it was only 6 days." I explained to him.
"Yeah, but was it boring? What did you do? Who'd you talk to? Did you get in any fights? Oh, did you hook up with anyone?" He laughed after the last question and socked me on the arm. I just laughed and told him he was retarded too.
"Yes it was hella boring in jail, all I did was play card, drink coffee, and watch TV. I talked to everyone in my pod. No, I didn't fight with anyone moron." As I thought about the last question I gave Elliott a wicked smile. "And, no I didn't really hook up with anyone in jail, but I wanted too. I met this chick named Jackie, we talked a lot, and I kissed her right before I left, but that's pretty much it." My smile faded.
"What do you mean that's it?" You went to jail and met a girl?" Elliott laughed and probed a bit more.
"I didn't get any of her information. No jail identification number, no booking number, I didn't even get the jail's mailing address." I further explained to Elliott.
"Do you know her last name?" Elliot asked.
"Yeah its Dusan." I replied. "Why?"
"Because that's how I looked up your release date on the County Jail website." Elliott told me about the website some more. I couldn't wait to look up Ms. Jacqueline Dusan's information online. "I hope she doesn't think I'm a stalker" I thought to myself as I thought about getting Jackie's information so I could write her.
"I'll check it out tomorrow." I said as I took my last hit of the blunt before throwing it into the fire. "Tonight, we're celebrating!!! I'm free BITCHES, It's Margar's Birthday, AND we're having a BABY! Somebody give me a fucking shot!" I yelled out to everyone and laughed. "Whooo Hooo, Hell Yeah!" Everyone partying cheered and raised their drinks into the air for a quick like toast.
I walked inside and headed to my room so I could change real quickly. I was still wearing those close I went to court in. Sweats and a long sleeve was not the theme for this evening. I grabbed some pants, and button up, my DC's, a sports bra, and some boxers then headed to the shower. I took a quick one but it felt great. I hadn't been in a real bathroom in a week. It felt wonderful, I didn't have to keep hitting the button to make the water come back on. I hurried it up though, there were a million people in the house and the bathrooms were a necessity. The whole time I was in the shower I though of Jackie, as I dressed I thought of Jackie, I walked out of the bathroom, went into my room briefly to put my dirty clothes in the hamper, and then headed out to the kitchen to grab a beer. I promised myself I'd put Jackie on the back burner for the night, then popped the cap on my corona and took a long ass drink. I licked my lips. "Delicious." I said to myself and then headed outside.
There were like 30 people here, all friends and family but mostly just friends. My brother Elliott and my sister-in-law Margar (short for Margarita - inside story) have been together since they were both like 20 and now Margar had just turned 30. Damn, time flies, all the people here they had met along the way either through school or work. I wish Jackie could be here I thought briefly but then thought of something else. I didn't want to break my own promise. I talked with pretty much everyone that night. We smoked, and smoked, and drank, and then smoked and drank some more. I was wasted by 4am and so was everyone else. Well, except for Margar and the other DD's. Elliott and I smoked another blunt then I said good night/morning to everyone, went to the bathroom, then finally found my very own bed, laid down and passed the fuck out. It felt wonderful to be in a queen size bed, with non- wool itchy covers. I must have been thinking of Jackie because the next thing I can remember is being back in Jail.
Except for this time, there where only too people in the pod. Jackie and myself. That's it, everyone else must had been rolled up into other pods or they were up in the yard or something. My mind felt a bit hazy as I sat up in my bunk. I looked for the clock through the window. It was only 5am. Over in the common area Jackie was sitting at a table playing cards facing the TV watching Friends or something. I climbed down off my bunk, walked up behind her, leaned down and gave her a peck on the cheek.
"Why are you awake?" I asked Jackie as I headed over to the bathroom area to pee.
"You're leaving in less than 24 yrs, I can't sleep." Jackie admitted her distress then got up and walked over to the hot water heater. She filled the cup then headed back her table to make some more coffee play cards. I didn't know what to say though. It's not like I wanted to just leave jail and walk right out of her life. We met in fucked up circumstances. I walked over to my bung, leaned down, opened my drawer, and took out my cup. Jackie's coffee looked bomb, and now I wanted some too. Plus, I didn't want to go back to sleep, especially since I knew that she was feeling this way. I closed my drawer, walked over to her table pulled up a chair and sat down beside Jackie. She didn't take her eyes off of her cards. I looked at her and could see tears running down her cheeks.
"Why are you crying Jackie? I'm right here." I said as I faced her towards me. I wiped her tears with my thumbs as I held her face in my hands. I kissed her softly to reassure her but it didn't work.
"You're here for now, but what about later on tonight? You'll be gone then and I'll be here all alone." She cried softly and looked down once again.
"Look at me. Look at us. We're in jail Jackie." I tried not to sound too harsh. "I sure as fuck didn't plan to come to jail so I could hook up with a little hottie to pass my time. And don't think I meant it like that." I tried to explain it in a way so Jackie wouldn't be so hurt. " I mean come on, we're here, we've already messed around a bit, we hella like each other and maybe we might even make something out of this if we weren't locked up; but we are. Period. I leave tonight. We can either spend my last day here together, or I can stay out of your way and try to let you deal with me leaving but that's gonna be even worse for me. You don't think I'm hella hurting right now too?" I questioned Jackie as my eyes started to sting. I could feel my tears ready to fall and run down my cheeks. "I've only known your for 5 days out of my 24 years and I already feel so attached to you, I'm scared to lose that when I leave. I...." I kept rambling on until I felt Jackie's fingers covering my lips as she whispered in my ear. "Shhhh" she said then tuned my face towards hers and planted her lips over mine. I spread my lips a bit and pulled her in for an even deeper kiss. Her lips parted and I felt her tongue slide over my lips and then back into its place. I sucked on her lower lip and then gave it a gentle bit. Her lips were so juicy, you just wanted to nibble on them. I released and the gave Jackie small kisses down her chin and onto her neck. She tilted her head to give me more access. I licked her neck, then kissed, and bit on her some more. I was on fire. I couldn't just sit here and tease myself anymore.
"I can't do this." I finally stopped and told Jackie.
"What? How dare you...?" Jackie started blaring until I covered her mouth and stood up facing her.
"No, not this, not us." I tried to explain as I got Jackie calm again. "I can't get all excited right here in the middle of the common area and go buck wild with you." I said as I pointed to the open area around us.
"That is a problem." Jackie admitted as she finally regained her composer. "One of the CO's could walk in and we'd be in serious shit." Jackie stated as she looked at me.
"Duh, that's why I have an idea." I joked as I walked over to my bunk, grabbed my extra jump suit, a pair or chonies, a sports bra, a pair of socks, and my towel. "Don't just look at me, get your shower stuff." I told Jackie as I laughed.
"Oh, we're going to shower together. Sweet." Jackie giggled as she finally got what I had in mind. She grabbed her towel a sports bra and her boxer shorts, those are all the only things she actually wears around the pod.
"Everyone will be out in the yard for another hour and a half, so we have some time." Jackie said as we headed over towards the showers.
"Time for what?" I kidded as I followed that nice round booty.
"Shut your mouth, you know what mean." Jackie said as she stopped and turned around. I kept walking and bumped right into her on purpose. I leaned forward and gave her a soft peck and then she turned.
"Yeah, see, you mean more time for that." I laughed. We closed the flimsy shower curtain and then sat our items down on the chairs we kept in the shower stall as a bench. I stood in front of Jackie and pulled her jumpsuit down all the way. She already had it down around her waist so I just took it all the way off. I pulled her girly boxers down and sat them on the chair. I gave her kisses up her leg from her knee to her thigh, to her hip, cover her belly and up her chest with little soft pecks. I pulled her sports bra up and off as well. Finally, there she was fucking naked and so god damn beautiful in front of my eyes. I took it all in then wrapped my arms around her waist and pulled her in for another long kiss. This time we kissed with nothing but lips, so intimate, like nothing I'd ever experienced. That's what she made me feel all the time. Still kissing we walked over to the showerhead once underneath, I let her go, stepped back and pressed the button. Warm water shot out covering Jackie's body making her glisten in the fluorescent lighting.
"Here." I said as I stepped back and grabbed the shampoo to give to her. Jackie took the bottle as I turned around to undress. I was a bit shy but tried to hide it as I walked up behind Jackie rinsing her hair and put my arms around her waist. I slid them up her belly rolling them over and stopping on her breasts. They were so full and firm in my hands. I rubbed her nipples through my fingers.
"Ooohh." Jackie just took a deep breath and held it. I turned around facing me. We were both under the streaming water looked in an eye war. I wouldn't take mine off hers and she the name. She stood a bit taller than me but not by much. I leaned up a little and gave her a kiss on the left cheek, another on her right cheek, one up on her fore head, one down on the tip of her nose, and the final on her lips. We held that kiss for a some time. Just holding each other close and kissing underneath the warm water. I was in heaven.
I kissed down Jackie's cheek stopping once more at her neck. I loved it, her skin was so soft and she tasted so good. I licked, kissed down to her collarbone. Jackie just lean her head back against the shower wall and place her hands on the back of my head. I bit her shoulder a little hard, but she just inhaled quickly and pulled my hair short hair a bit. My hands were all over Jackie's body by this time. I caressed her back, thighs, her round cheeks, my hands roamed all over but I kept away form a certain area. I kissed down Jackie's neck further until I felt her cleavage. I place my lips around her nipple and sucked softly. I licked over, kissed, and nibbled on her precious little pink nipple. My hand manipulated the other nipple and I could feel Jackie going insane. She needed some release. Her chest was just pulsating, rising and lowering with each breath.
I didn't stop though. I continued my journey down her sexy body. I now found myself at her small pansa. It was flat and had a light tan. I gave Jackie little kisses all over her belly, sucking her skin in making a light hickey right on her hip bone. I smiled to myself as I saw it, it wasn't very dark so I bother to tell her. Instead, I kept going lower. Jackie spread her legs a bit wider as she felt me grow closer to her sweet spot. She had a landing strip, still rather trimmed since she had only been in for a few days. I spread her lips a bit and just looked at the lovely sight in front of my eyes. I took a deep breath and then licked from her the bottom her lips all the way up to her clitoris hood. "Oh fuck!!.." She went fucking crazy. So I did it again, and again. She buckled a bit the regained her composure. She tasted so good, and she was so wet. I started from the top of her labia then kissed and sucked all around her pussy making sure to leave her clit alone. I darted my tongue into her glory whole for a bit and then replaced it with my index finger. Not quickly though, I rubber her juices onto my finger and then inserted slowly. I drew small circles inside of her with my finger. As Jackie relaxed to the touch I inserted my middle finger too. I pumped both fingers in and out a few times to get them both lubed up. She felt fucking fantastic in my arms or hand I should say. I curled my fingers up and found her special sport without much effort. She let out a soft cry.
"Oh m god Sara..." is all I could hear Jackie say. I kept my fingers curled and started to move my wrist in a slow circular motion, but this time I pushed a little deeper and kept up the same pace. Jackie was moving her hips to my rhythm simultaneously. She breathed heard and clawed the back of my neck with her nails. I felt her slipping, so I finally gave in and jabbed at her clit with my tongue. Jackie jumped right back up, my fingers were even deeper now. I kept sliding my fingers in and out of Jackie's muffin, but now I sucked on her clitoris as well. I used my other hand to hold onto her. She was bucking furiously now and me attacking her clitoris didn't quite help.
"Oh my god, you're going to make me cum." I heard those words so many times before haha. But this time was different. I kept up even a little faster and bit down on and sucked her clit in as I felt Jackie go stiff and inhale deep. Her legs were wrapped around my tiny head, I thought it was going to pop off. She let out a bit of a yelp and then relaxed. Jackie sunk against the wall in my arms.
"Are you ok?" I asked.
Jackie looked down at me and then smiled. "Of course silly. It's just been a minute, and I sure as fuck wasn't expecting that."
I smirked a bit. "You didn't know I had skills or what?" I said as I rose up to give her a kiss and hugged her close.
Jackie looked into my eyes. "You're so full of shit you know that." She said as she kissed me back.
"That's right." I joked back. We stood there under the stream of water falling onto our shoulders and running down or bodies to the cold cement floor. I traced my fingertips up and down her back. Up to her shoulders and then down to her thighs. Her skin felt so smooth and silky with the mixture of water and soap. I didn't want to ever let her go but it was inevitable.
"Look at my hands." I said as I showed Jackie my wrinkled skin. "I think we've been in here for way too long." I said as I headed over to grab my towel of the chair.
"Awww no I'm not ready to get out." Jackie whined. "That's ok, stay in the water. I'll be waiting to cuddle with you on my bunk." I let Jackie know and walked over to my bunk to put my belongings away.
"Wait for me." I heard Jackie plea as I headed to my bed. She shut the shower water off and followed me with only her towel on.
"You're so gonna get thrown in the whole if one of the guards catches you like that." I warned as she walked my way.
"What you don't like?" Jackie questioned as she dropped her stuff off at her bunk and walked up to my bunk.
"Oh I fucking love it." I answered with a big cheesy smile. "Come here already." I begged her to climb up to my bunk. I lay there with my head propped up resting on my left hand. My legs were straight and relaxed. I looked up at Jackie as she crawled across my mattress and straddled my legs. I rolled over onto my back with my head propped up against the wall resting on my pillow. My eyes met hers and I pulled her into me. I couldn't help but want to kiss her. Jackie's lips were my own kryptonite, and I couldn't get enough of them. Jackie broke our kiss and rested her head on my chest. I looked over at the clock at that time. It was 6:45am already. Everyone would be back in a few minutes but we didn't care. Jackie and I just lay there cuddled up wither head on my chest. I felt her breaths get deeper and I knew she had fallen asleep. I leaned down and gave her a peck on the forehead and then went to sleep myself.
Oh why is my head pounding I thought to myself as I flickered my eyelids open. With one eye still shut I looked out over the covers. "Oh, I'm in my room." I said barely audible. I closed my eyes and I saw Jackie and everything came back. "It was only a dream!!" I whispered kind of heartbroken. I hadn't dreamt of a girl in over a year and now the girl of my dreams was stuck in a jail cell and I don't even know how to get a hold of her. I couldn't really think though, my head was pounding and I needed to pee. I got up, put some clothes on and went to the bathroom. "I love my bathroom." I thought to myself as I peed. It had only been a week since I used it last but it felt like an eternity. I finished then washed my hand and face to wake up a bit. I took a couple Tylenol's and left the bathroom. I walked passed the computer are then turned right back around when I remembered what Elliott had said. I sat at the computer and brought up the browser. Google is my shit, I google everything, so I googled Fresno, Ca Sheriff department. Low and behold the second listing was for inmate information. I smiled and clicked on the link. The next page asked for a booking number or first and last names. So I entered in Dusan and up popped Ms. Jacqueline Dusan. Her booking number, jail id number, and the jail address, "I found her." I though out loud. Now all I had to do was write Jackie and wait for her to reply.
I wrote a short letter, added a picture of myself, and then headed to the post office to drop it off. Now all I had to do was wait. "I know she's going to be excited I thought to myself." I couldn't wait to see her again.....and oh how I would.
- Well that's it for Part 2. I'll try to have part 3 ready in a couple weeks. With school and work it's a little hard to get inspired. Hope you enjoyed it, until next time, Sara.....esrairkaa@yahoo.com