On Saturn

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On Saturn

Chapter 6

[November 27th, 2014 - Thanksgiving]

The holidays were pretty busy days in my family, my parents being the social bugs they were. We were hosting Thanksgiving this year. My brother came home, as did my grandparents, my aunt Sussie with her husband and a couple who I'd never met, but were introduced as friends of my parents. Sussie was my dad's older sister. She'd remarried and it seemed she didn't see much of her daughter, my cousin Mary. She was married herself and I only remembered seeing her when I was a little kid and she was already in college.

Like I've mentioned before, I was born when my parents were already in their late thirties and my extended family are all older than me, my dad being the youngest of three siblings. This meant I was late to the party. My cousins were all older and already in college or married, and I rarely ever saw them. If it hadn't been for my friends, I would've had a pretty sad and lonely childhood.

Mom and dad's friends were actually nice and fun. They looked to be in their forties, the man and my dad met at work and they didn't have children. After hearing them talk, I appreciated their view on life and stuff, and I remember feeling related to their lifestyle. I didn't have an opinion on having kids yet, but they seemed happy and I could see myself growing up to love my career and experience the freedom they seemed to have.

My parents were not fans of turkey on Thanksgiving and I was glad. I finished dinner early and asked to be excused. I went to the living room and pulled out my phone. I texted Jordy.

"What u up to?"

It took a minute for his reply to come through.

"Not much, just finishing dinner. There's like a thousand people at my place lol" he replied.

"It's crowded here too. Wanna hang out?" I asked him. I knew Abby and Aaron were visiting relatives today, so it was just Jordy and I.

"Yeah, meet me outside in 5?"

It was pretty cold outside, but we had nowhere else to go.

"Ok" I replied and went to my room to get my coat and scarf. I told my mom I'd go to Jordy's and stepped out the door.

I walked the few blocks to his place in the cold, cloudy weather. I loved cold weather at this time of my life. I liked looking out the window and see the leafless trees, clouds and rain, the snow gathered at the side of the wet street and the gloomy atmosphere. As I grew older my love for the summer won over, though. I can now appreciate both seasons' pros and cons.

As I got to Jordy's house, he was standing there waiting for me. He wore a wool hat, equally thick coat as mine and gloves. His longish curls peeked our from underneath the hat. We fist bumped and said hello.

"How can you wear gloves?" I asked him. I hated that I had to take them off all the time to be able to use my cell phone. "Don't you need your fingers to use your phone?

"These are cell phone ready, dumbass." he said while holding up his fingers, letting me see the thin silver string knit in between the wool, always the geeky bastard he was.

"Wha...?" I couldn't finish the question. I was curious now how that worked.

He proceeded to demonstrate how he pressed all the icons on his screen with no trouble at all.

"Get me one of those." I said and he laughed.

We started walking around our neighborhood while talking about usual stuff, like video games, music, movies, you name it. We actually shared many of the same interests, especially music. We loved many of the same bands and we talked about maybe going to see them live one day.

The talk then went around to Abby and I mentioned the bowling night.

"You and Abby talked a lot the other day." I asked trying not to sound like I was prying.

"Yeah, she told me she loves to draw and paint. And I'm the same so we kind of hit it off." he explained. "Is it a problem?" he added after a second of silence.

"Oh! No! I wasn't trying to meddle, I was just curious." I said. "I like that you get along." I added with a smile.

"Yeah, she's great." he smiled back.

"So... Do you like anyone?" I wondered how he was doing since he opened up to me to tell me he liked me. I didn't know how to ask him about this directly

"Yeah, you." he said with a blank expression.

I was regretting I ever asked the question, I didn't want to make this uncomfortable for him, but he just made it very uncomfortable for me.

"I'm fucking with you!" he broke out in laughter and I couldn't avoid a smile.

"Asshole." I countered.

"Don't be so uptight about it. It's okay." he said warmly. "I don't like anyone in particular now, I'm doing fine after I told you I liked you. I'm just focused on other stuff." he added.

"So you jack off a lot." I said matter-of-factly in an amused tone.

"Don't mock me just because you're having sex." he said, smiling. "You probably have a tiny dick."

I'd never talked about sex with Jordy before the last few weeks. It was a good thing he was opening up about it. I wondered if Aaron talked to him about sex.

"You say that because your dick is tiny." I countered. "Want to compare?" I joked.

"What are you, eleven?" he replied and then we both laughed.

"What are you, afraid?" I joked again.

"I'm not! Just don't want to shame you like I did to Aaron." he said, which must have put a funny look on my face, judging by how quickly his smile faded and a blush took over his face.

I guess he thought there was something I was supposed to know about. Or maybe he just spilled it unintentionally.

"I..." I started saying something but couldn't finish.

"I'm just kidding!" he quickly put himself together and played it off as a joke. But I knew he'd meant that. Were they jacking off together? I felt a little jealous that they were up to something that didn't include me, but I decided not to press the issue.

"Whatever, tiny dick." I wanted to have the last laugh and he joined me.

We'd been walking for an hour and it was getting dark, so we decided to get back to his place and sat on the curb.

"Aaron said we should go camping sometime." I said.

"Yeah, he mentioned it to me. We can go to the lake when it's warmer." he suggested.

"Yeah, maybe in the summer. It can be fun if it's just us. As in, no parents." I'm sure my parents would let me go as long as they didn't have to come, so that left Jordy's dad to do the supervision, as Aaron lived with his mom.

"You mean my dad?" he picked up on the idea.

"Yeah, I mean, we'll be fifteen and Aaron will be almost sixteen by summer." I said. "I don't think we need supervision."

"Yeah. We'll need a ride anyway." he had a point.

"We should thank your dad in some way, he's driving us all around all the time." I said, geniunely concerned.

"He said it's fine by him, he likes driving me and my friends around." he said, and I felt kind of sad that my dad wasn't that close to me.

"You're so lucky you don't know." I smiled at him.

"I do know." he giggled.

"What are you doing tomorrow?" I asked him, already making plans in my head for the weekend.

"Oh, me and my parents are driving up to my uncle's until Sunday." that sounded like a cool plan, my parents never took me anywhere with them. "He's got a farm and horses and shit. A lot of shit." he said and we laughed at the pun.

"Well I'd better go home." I said before wishing him a good trip. We fist bumped and I went home as he walked inside his house.

I was a little down that I didn't have any plans for the weekend. Spending time with my family was not really my favorite activity. I hoped either Abby or Aaron weren't also leaving.

[November 29th, 2014 - Sleepover]

My family decided to drive back to my aunt Sussie's with my grandparents for the weekend, so they left Saturday morning and would return on Sunday. My brother joined them and they assumed I was going as well. That's when I told my parents I preferred to stay if it wasn't any trouble with them.

My mom briefly discussed this with my dad and they agreed that it was only one day and I was old enough to take care of myself. I thanked them and hugged them briefly, while I celebrated my small victory inside. I went to bed on Friday night knowing they wouldn't be home when I woke up.

Today was Saturday and luckily Abby had returned from her Thanksgiving trip. Her mom dropped her off at around noon and she knew we'd have the house to ourselves all day. We planned to make the most of it, even if she wasn't allowed to stay the night.

We were in the middle of making out on the couch, not five minutes after she arrived, when I got several unrelenting texts in my phone. I decided to check just in case something happened to my parents.

It was Aaron.

"Can I come over?" "Pls" "PLS! :(" "Ethan u there?" "Come on! :("

"Hi man, what's going on?" I replied.

"I just got into a fight with my mom, can I come over?"

I showed the text to Abby with a somewhat apologetic expression on my face.

"What's wrong?" she asked me.

"I don't know, but it must be bad since he wants to come here." I explained.

"That's fine, tell him to come, if he doesn't mind that I'm here." she said.

"But, our day together..." I didn't want my lust to dictate my actions, but my cock was hard at the idea of a whole day with Abby and it was difficult to ignore it.

"But Aaron needs you. Plus, we spend almost every Saturday together." she argued.

"Yeah, you're probably right." I concluded and proceeded to write back to Aaron.

"Sure man" I sent.

"Thanks! Be right over" he wrote back almost immediately.

Me and Abby kissed briefly and I squeezed her boobs one last time as a souvenir and she rubbed my cock in return. I was pretty down that we had to stop our play, but she was right and whatever was going on with Aaron was more important.

Five minutes later there was a knock on the door and I got up to answer. I found Aaron standing there with his eyes puffy and red.

"Hey." I greeted him and stepped aside to let him in.

He threw his arms around me and hugged me tightly as soon as he was inside. He sounded like he was about to cry when he spoke.

"Thanks for this." he said.

"Yeah, anytime man." I put my arms around him briefly and then he let go of me when he saw that Abby was sitting on the couch smiling our way.

"Oh! I didn't know... Shit, I'm interrupting you guys!" he said in a shaky tone.

"It's okay Aaron, we can hang out." Abby said as she got up and walked over to hug Aaron. "Whatever you need, we're here."

"Thanks, guys." he said.

"What happened?" I asked as we walked into the living room. I noticed that he brought his backpack with him.

"I had a fight with my mom and I left. It was probably for the better anyway." he explained.

"Was it that bad?" Abby asked him while we all sat on the couch, me behind her.

"Yeah... She's been a real jerk to me the last few weeks and I guess I haven't been the perfect son either." he rubbed tears from his eyes. "She's barely ever at home and she expects me to keep the house from becoming a total hell. I stopped caring when I found out she's been spending a lot of time at this new guy's place. Then she brought him home the last few days and that's when I lost it. I had to leave or it was going to get worse with him. I hate to leave the girls in there with them, but I think it's for the best. My mom is only thinking of what's right for her."

I knew he could stand a fight if he had to, although I'd never known him to be in any fight.

"You want to stay here?" I asked him, pointing at the backpack.

"Yeah, if that's no problem?" he asked.

"Sure, man. As long as you need." I smiled remembering the sleepovers we used to have when we were younger.

"Thanks." he smiled back.

"My parents are gone till tomorrow, so it's good that you keep me company." I wanted to make him feel good, since there was really no problem that he stayed with me. My brother's room was empty and he could sleep there. My parents wouldn't care. "You can stay in Matt's room." I added.

"Cool, thanks again!" he said, then added "Are you staying too, Abby?"

"No!" she replied quickly and giggled. "I mean, I'm sure my mom wouldn't have a problem, but I just don't want to push it."

We'd discussed this before and both prefer that she didn't push the issue with her mom, since she was so supportive of her relationship with me. She just wanted to make sure we were safe and she trusted Abby with everything else.

"Your mom sounds like a cool person." Aaron told Abby with a sad tone.

"Yeah..." her look of compassion showed me she sensed where the sadness was coming from, both of them living with single moms. "I know it can be tough for just one parent to try to support a family on their own and make it."

"My mom's a total jerk." Aaron frowned.

"I'm not justifying what your mom does, just... I think I know what you're going through. I can only imagine how it'd be like at home if mom didn't hold it together." she confidently rested her hand on his knee and squeezed a little.

"Yeah... Right now I wish I could leave and be on my own. But Sophie and Maddie, I can't leave them with her." he reflected. "I can't even think of the hell they'll be through if I'm not there for them."

I was feeling a little out of context with all this, my family issues going through a totally different place. I wanted to be there for my friend nevertheless.

"I'm here, whatever you need, man." I said, looking into Aaron's eyes.

"Same goes for me, okay?" Abby added and Aaron turned his gaze to hers.

"Thanks guys, you're the best." he finally smiled and looked between each of us.

"So, who's hungry?" Abby said while getting up from the couch.

"You, apparently." I joked with her.

"Okay, you're not getting any." she countered, the sexual innuendo obvious to me.

"I want some!" Aaron said. I wasn't quite sure he got the sexual reference.

"As in sex?" I asked her blatantly, smirking.

Aaron looked at her, the way he waited for her to reply meant that he was in the joke as well.

"No, you pervs!" she laughed. "I mean food!"

We all laughed after that and got up to head for the kitchen. I couldn't help my mind from going back to that sex fantasy that was so usual as of late. Suddenly I realized I would be alone with Abby and Aaron, uninterrupted for a whole day. I imagined the three of us having incredibly wild sex non-stop until the next day. I started getting this hot feeling in my gut, which quickly went to my dick. I felt it twitch as it started filling with blood. I was torn between my lust and my feelings for Abby. I felt bad even thinking of bringing it up with her, but I felt so compelled to do it when my dick was hard.

"Ethan?" Abby snapped me out of my thoughts.

"Huh?" I asked, dumbfounded.

"Where do you keep your groceries?" she asked and I realized I'd followed them to the kitchen like a zombie and didn't register it.

"Um..." I was trying to kick start my brain. "Up here." I finally walked up to the cupboard above the sink.

Abby was very nice to prepare lunch for the three of us. She mastered the kitchen, you could tell she'd done this many times before and she also seemed to love it. We chit-chatted while she was making lunch and later while eating it, but I couldn't stop thinking of sex with the two of them now that the image had crossed my mind. I played out situations in my mind, which led me to think how willing would they be to actually do it.

Would Aaron want to do it? I was certain he wouldn't pass up the opportunity, being the horn dog he was. Would Abby want to do it? That was a different thing altogether. I started feeling bad for even thinking about it again. The idea was so thrilling, but made me feel guilty at the same time. I was torn.

Aaron suggested we watch a movie and he picked it. I don't remember what it was. We agreed and sat on the living room couch in front of the TV. Aaron was sitting on the L side of the couch, one foot on the floor, the other leg up. Me and Abby were sitting close to each other, about four feet from him at the other end of the couch. The room was dimly lit, as there was no sunlight outside, the drapes were closed and we only had the screen to provide any lighting.

We'd brought a blanket and were sort of cuddling under it. Even though it wasn't really cold inside, we enjoyed the ritual of wrapping a blanket around us in this weather while watching a movie.

Aaron was apparently beat, because not half an hour into the movie he'd fallen asleep. I noticed when Abby looked his way and I followed her gaze. Not a minute after, her hand on my thigh started slowly rubbing it over my sweatpants, sliding down the inside to rub between my legs. I got hard immediately, all my pent up horniness from being interrupted earlier taking its toll.

I put my left hand on her waist and stroked her, while I had my right arm around her shoulders. I lost what little interest I had in the movie, as the thrill of touching each other with Aaron in the room took over my mind and body.

I couldn't believe this was actually happening! Aaron was snoring lightly a few feet from us and Abby didn't care. She stroked my thigh and then slid her hand to my balls and my achingly hard cock in one swift movement. I looked at her, but she was looking at the screen. She was still pretending to watch the movie, I guess in case Aaron woke up suddenly. I took a quick look at him and he was still sleeping and he hadn't moved.

I decided to follow her lead and slid my hand from her waist to her left boob and started massaging it over her clothes. My eyes kept going from her face to Aaron, just to make sure we were safe. She started rubbing and squeezing my hard cock through my sweatpants and boxers, I couldn't help but to moan silently in her ear. I saw a small smile from in the corner of her lips like she enjoyed having that effect on me.

I slid my hand under her shirt and sweater to cup her breast. She slid her hand easily inside my pants and underwear and grabbed my cock. She slowly stroked it up and down, the blanket clearly showing the silhouette of her hand as it moved. I licked her ear as I got hornier and hornier, now going from one boob to the other and rubbing and squeezing them. She moaned lightly and closed her eyes for a second in response.

I looked at Aaron one more time and he was still asleep. This made me bolder and I slid my hand down to her jeans and started undoing the button and zipper. Her hand on my cock started going the littlest bit faster, squeezing on my glans on each stroke. I slid my hand inside her panties and the feel of her shaved pussy under my fingers sent a hot wave of pleasure all over my body. I slid a couple of fingers in between her pussy lips as she opened her legs slowly to allow me.

She turned her head toward me for the first time and we connected our lips in a hot kiss. She moaned into my mouth louder this time, just as my fingers started rubbing her pussy and probing at the opening.

I took a quick look at Aaron once again to confirm he hadn't moved and seemed to be sound asleep. I decided to push ourselves further, just like she'd asked me when we started having sex. "Suck me?" I whispered, looking into her eyes. She looked at me briefly, bit her bottom lip and squeezed my cock at the same time. Then she lifted the blanket and very slowly shifted her ass away from me so she could go down on me. She got under the blanket and soon I felt her tongue against the head of my cock.

If I couldn't believe it earlier, I was out of my mind now. We were pushing this really far. I fixed my eyes on Aaron to make sure he was sleeping. There was no way we could play this off if he woke up and saw us. We were flat out having sex in front of him. And Abby seemed to be as turned on by the situation as I was. As I felt her lips wrap around my cock, I wondered again how likely it was that she was open to having sex with me and Aaron. The feelings from my cock were overpowering any feelings of guilt and shame I could get. I allowed my mind to go back to the porn scene I'd made up in my mind and replayed so many times in the last month or so, starring the three of us. I imagined we spent hours doing everything we came up with and none of us wanted to stop.

Abby was going up and down on my shaft, expertly sucking my cock. I looked down and saw her head moving under the blanket was obscene. There was no point in covering it. I looked Aaron's way once more and seeing no change, I decided to return some of the pleasure to Abby. I pulled on her shoulders lightly and she came up from under the blanket. I kissed her briefly and slowly shifted my weight and slid down until I was kneeling on the floor in front of her, taking most of the blanket with me. She motioned for me to be quiet as she looked between me and Aaron, since the couch moved and made quite some noise when I slid to the floor. I was scared we'd woken him up but I smiled at her after I checked and saw he hadn't moved. She smiled back and it encouraged me to keep going.

I put my cock inside my pants again and tugged at her open jeans and she helped me get them off, lifting her hips very slowly, trying not to make a noise. Soon her pants were below her knees and I finished taking them off. I looked into her eyes to judge her reaction as I tugged at her panties. She was half naked, with me kneeling in between her legs. There was no way we could get out of this should Aaron wake up. He'd know we were openly having sex beside him. I was amazed we'd made it this far and she was okay with it. Me, I was driven by sheer lust. We were so close to the next step of actually including Aaron in our sex play. I wondered if she knew as much, if she was aware of what we were getting into, if she was okay with that, wanted it, even. She bit her lip again and closed her eyes briefly. I took that as a sign that there was no going back and slid her panties down her legs and off, leaving them with her pants on the floor to my right. I took one more look at Aaron and he still hadn't moved. I felt the rush of the situation once again and just bent down to bring my face closer to Abby's pussy.

I lapped up at her lips, sucking on them while trying not to make a noise. It proved to be very difficult and the slurps were sometimes audible. I kept stealing glances Aaron's way just to make sure he was asleep. I never stopped moving my tongue inside her pussy and around the opening. Abby started moaning softly, her hand was on her mouth trying to mute the sounds coming out of it. My head was moving slightly as I ate every last bit I could of her delicious pussy.

Then I directed my eyes to my left to check on Aaron and stopped dead, shock freezing my body with a jolt.

His eyes were open and he was looking at me. My face buried in between Abby's legs. His cock was obviously hard in his pants. He smiled at me.

It took a second for Abby to realize I had stopped and she looked at me, then followed my eyes towards Aaron. She gasped loudly in shock, I felt her legs shake beside my face.

Aaron looked at her when she gasped, still smiling.

"Oh!" she uttered while breathing heavily. I was still stuck to her pussy and a few seconds had passed. My initial shock was gone and replaced by a wave of hotness and lust, seeing his smile hadn't dropped.

This was it. I had to act quickly if I wanted this to go on, or else, the shock would make Abby want to stop. On the other hand, this was the point where I could put our relationship first and stop the madness. My hard cock and a whole month worth of fantasizing ruled.

I resumed eating her pussy.

"Ohh! Ethan!" she exclaimed breathlessly. "Mmm!" she moaned as her hips pushed forward against my face and her head tilted back. She was clearly over the shock and had given in to this.

I lapped at her clit and sucked on it, not trying to keep it quiet now. She writhed as she kept pushing her pussy towards my, her hands flew to my head.

I couldn't help but to feel extremely excited that she'd decided to go on. We were on the same page. Was she aware of the situation then? Did she want this all along? Did she also ponder what this meant for our relationship? Then I remembered it was her who started rubbing me under the blanket. That thought freed me of any inhibitions I might've still had and fueled my lust.

I sat back up and lowered the front of my sweatpants and underwear to release my achingly hard cock, hooking them below. I then reached into the pocket for the condom that I'd planned to use earlier when Aaron interrupted us. I ripped it open and swiftly slid it over my dick.

"Ahh!" Abby moaned while her left hand shot to her pussy and she rubbed her clit intently.

I caught movement out of the corner of my eye and looked over to see Aaron massaging his engorged cock through his jeans. He wasn't smiling anymore, just staring at Abby's fingers as she pleasured herself.

I placed my left hand on her thigh and guided my cock to her pussy opening with my right. I pushed lightly and soon my cock was enveloped wholly by her hot wet tunnel.

"Ahh..." I couldn't help but moan out my lust as I realized I was fucking my girlfriend in front of my best friend, while he touched himself and watched the whole thing.

I started rocking my hips, sending my cock in and out of Abby, rubbing the inner walls of her pussy. Sloshing sounds mixed with our moans filled the room. The movie was still playing in the background but I ignored it completely. I fucked her harder and faster and she moaned louder in return. This was great. This is what we were good at together, and it was on display for Aaron to enjoy.

I saw him undo his jeans and pull out his hard cock, about the same girth but an inch longer than mine at seven. He started openly jacking his cock and I kept staring at him as my hips drove my cock in autopilot.

"Ohh! Oh god!" Abby moaned. I looked at her and she was staring at Aaron as well. His gaze was going from our crotches mashing to my face, to her face.

I pushed her sweater and shirt up out of the way to reveal her bra covered tits. She held it as I used my right hand to stroke her breasts, waist and belly. All the while she kept staring at Aaron's dick and moaning.

She then pulled her clothes up over her head and off. Then she looked me in the eyes as she reached back and unhooked her bra, quickly discarding it and letting her tits out freely. She held my stare and I started thrusting harder, my hips slapping her thighs every now and then.

"Mmmm! Yeah!" she moaned and the staring contest was over as she turned her head once again to look at Aaron jacking his cock. She was half sitting, half lying on the couch, her ass just at the edge, perfect for my cock to go fully inside her hot pussy. She wore her hair in a pony tail today.

I turned my head towards Aaron and watched him jerk his dick for a few seconds. I noticed he stopped, pushed his pants and underwear down to his knees and knelt on the couch. Then he scooted closer to Abby slow but certain, in a very matter-of-fact attitude. My eyes grew wide with how naturally he presented his cock to her face. It was unspoken. He made it look so easy, like it was nothing. Here was my fantasy about to become real. And it was so simple. I stared at Abby as she never looked away from the approaching cock. She stared at it for a few seconds before opening her mouth and wrapping it around the head.

She never looked at me. She didn't ask for approval or my consent. And it was fair. I'd agreed to this and I'd had the chance to stop it when I wanted. Now it wasn't just about me anymore. She may have been living out a fantasy just as much as I was.

I watched her start to bob her head on Aaron's cock, taking about four inches in her mouth. I moaned out loud in lust. "Awww!" came out of my open mouth.

I started fucking Abby harder and faster, my thighs slapping hers audibly with every thrust. I looked at her in a new light as I heard her muffled moans and felt her wet, twitching pussy around my cock. She must have been cumming constantly as I pounded her and she took Aaron in her mouth. He had pulled his clothes up so his defined pecs and abs were showing. He looked so manly like that, his cock in Abby's mouth. It was all the contact he was making with her.

I reached over with my right hand and started fondling and squeezing her tit, kind of like holding her for leverage as I pounded her pussy.

"Mmmm! Mmmmph!" came her moans as I picked up my pace and was now fucking her pussy as hard and as fast as I could.

Aaron started rocking his hips back and forth in time with Abby's bobbing head. She soon rested her head on the couch and let him do all the movement, fucking her face with about half his cock.

"Ahh fuck..." I moaned as the scene in front of me was driving me over the edge. I squeezed her tit several times as a fog of lust overtook me. I watched her other tit bounce freely with my thrusts.

"Ohh!" came from Aaron as he was supporting himself on the back of the couch, holding his clothes out of the way with his right hand and trusting his cock in and out of Abby's sucking mouth.

"Mmmmmphh!" Abby moaned as loud as she could through her mouthful of cock.

"Ohhh fuck!" I exclaimed as I couldn't hold it any longer and came inside the condom, my hips slowing down but hitting her thighs just as hard. "Argghhnnnn."

Aaron pulled his cock out of Abby's mouth and sat down on the couch, jacking his cock furiously as cum erupted from it and landed on his chest, his sweatshirt, his sleeve, his abs and his pubes. He was a mess.

Please drop me a line if you liked it or if you didn't. I really appreciate the feedback.

B