Going Down on Donny

By Daniel Gre

Published on Aug 12, 2000

Gay

WARNING: This story contains sexual situations including males having sex with each other. The story is erotic fiction. Do not read this story if you are under 18.

NOTE: Please send me your comments after you read the story. It's a lot more fun to read your comments than it is to write the stories. I promise to reply, especially if you like it. My e-mail address is danielgre@hotmail.com.

Going Down on Donny-1

By Daniel

The guys on the bus were excited about the road trip to Central Valley. We were on our way to a baseball tournament and we were stoked about the overnight trip away from our parents. We were going to stay up late and eat as much junk food as we could stuff into our greedy faces. Twenty teenagers crammed into a bus can sure make a racket when they're fired up. Coach Ruckman had to yell at us to pipe down.

Donny Cooper was sitting in front of me. He was the new guy at Hoover High, having transferred from St. Lukes about two weeks before the big trip. I wanted to make friends with him because I thought he was cute. I heard he was some kind of hotshot hitter on his old team and I figured he was about my age, which meant he was about sixteen. Other than that, I didn't know much about Donny, except that I found out he sure liked to talk, mostly about girls and sports.

About two hours into the bus ride, Donny started talking about all the girlfriends he had at St. Lukes. By the sound of it, you'd think he dated half the girls at his old school. He bragged about how the "honeys" really like him. He was kind of a big-mouth, but he was so sure of himself that I believed most of what he said. Besides, when I think a guy is cute I tend to overlook little flaws in his personality.

Pretty soon he was talking about this girl named Angela he used to date. Angela was in love with him and would do anything for him, except she wouldn't go all the way because she wanted to stay a virgin.

"I made her suck my dick every time we went on a date," said Donny.

All the other guys listening to Donny seemed to think that it was really cool that his girlfriend sucked him off. I thought it wasn't very nice of him to string poor Angela along just for sex and I thought the other guys were assholes for encouraging him. I wondered if Donny treated his guy friends the same way as his girlfriends.

Donny told us his secret for getting girlfriends, and this is what I remember him saying. First of all, it helps if you have good looks: Donny is tall and lanky like a basketball player and he has these green eyes that can bore into you like laser beams. But even if you're not drop-dead handsome, according to Donny you can still get girls if you have the right attitude. All you have to do is take charge and be the boss. Act like you know what you're doing, even if you haven't got a clue. Girls won't admit this, says Donny, but a lot of them secretly like their boyfriends to take charge and tell them what to do, even when it comes to sex.

When the bus pulled into the parking lot of this dump of a motel called the Riverside, Coach Ruckman lined us up along the length of the bus and told us to wait there until he registered in the office. About ten minutes later he came back out with a shoebox full of room keys some sort of computer printout of our room assignments. We all got our keys from the coach and compared them.

"Are you Billy Benderson?" asked Donny.

"Yeah," I said. "You must be Donny Cooper." I tried to act cool, like I didn't already know his name.

"Looks like we're roommates," said Donny.

We had a lively dinner in the motel restaurant, laughing and joking around, giving Ruckman a major headache. He finally got fed up with us and ordered us back to our rooms. He's a former marine and when he tells you to do something its pretty intimidating.

In our room I watched TV while Donny took a shower. When he came out of the bathroom, his brown hair was combed straight back and he was naked except for a towel tied around his waist. I could see a bump in the towel where his basket was. We made small talk until I got brave enough to bring up the conversation on the bus.

"I heard you talking about the blow job you got from that girl Angela," I said. "Was that the best blow job you ever got?"

Donny smiled and shook his head. "Angela didn't really like what she was doing," he said, "so she didn't do it very good. I'll tell you who gave me the best blow job, but you have to promise not to tell anybody."

I swore myself to secrecy and he told me about this guy named Parker who used to give him blow jobs at St. Lukes.

"You let a guy suck your dick?" I asked.

"Hell yeah," said Donny. "He really liked doing it and it felt great." Donny rubbed a deodorant stick under his armpits and flopped on the bed next to mine. "Who'd pass up a blow job? Besides, he said he liked it. He said he liked to suck my dick because it's so long and thick."

"You have a big dick?"

"That's what I've been told. It runs in the family. All my brothers have big dicks too. Even my little brother Jason, and he's only thirteen." Donny was sitting cross-legged on the bed, picking at a blister on his toe. The head of his dick was peeking out from under the towel. "Do you want to see it?"

"Um, I guess so."

He flung his damp towel on top of the air conditioner. His dick hung over the tan line on his thigh. "Wait `til you see it when it's stiff."

"It's thick, like a man's dick," I said.

He looked between my legs. "Looks like you already have a boner, dude."

I was sitting there with a stiff four-incher tenting my shorts, embarrassed that he'd noticed it. "I guess it was all that talk about blow jobs."

Donny shrugged. "That's cool." He jumped onto my bed. "Since you're already hard, I don't need to jerk you off. You can still do me, though."

I was a little embarrassed about getting a hard-on, but I was relieved that I didn't have to show Donny my dick. I was shy about having a small dick for a fifteen-year-old. Now he was sitting next to me on the twin bed, bare-ass naked. He told me to take off my shirt in case of "splatter." I did what he told me to do although I'm shy about my wimpy body.

"You're a skinny-ass kid," said Donny. "You need to get some meat on your bones."

Donny grabbed my hand and laid it on his dick. I'd never touched another guy's dick before and I felt weird about it, like it was forbidden or something, but that feeling didn't last very long. My hand was shaking a little as I wrapped my fingers around it and pulled on it very gently; more from being turned on than from nervousness. Donny told me to go faster. It was still soft, but it felt warm and thick. You get used to the thickness of your own dick, I guess. After playing with it for about a minute I felt it grow and stiffen in my palm. I picked up the pace of the stroking and pretty soon his dick was a throbbing twitching pole.

"Hold up, dude," said Donny. "I don't want to cum yet." I let go and he stood up. He paraded around the bed and his dick bounced up and down. "I like to show off my dick."

When he got to my side of the bed he stood next to me and said, "You wanna suck it, don't you?"

"Are you crazy?" I asked. I was real nervous and his dick was pointing right at my bony ribs like a long-barreled pistol.

"Quit playing games," said Donny. "I know you want to suck it." He poked me in the ribs with his big dick. "Come on. Nobody's going to find out."

I was so excited my head throbbed and I thought I could hear my heart thumping. He was right. I wanted to suck his dick. "You promise not to tell?"

"I promise. Now slide yourself down on the bed and lay on your stomach. That's it. Now open your mouth and let me slide my cock in."

I couldn't believe I was letting Donny stick his dick in my mouth, but I opened wide and his purple dick head passed over my lips. My tongue started moving around it. I was sucking my first dick.

Before all this happened with Donny I knew that someday I was going to suck a guy's dick. Sometimes, when I'd see a really cute guy that's what I'd think about doing. My biggest fear was that I might not like it once I got what I wanted. A guy's dick in your mouth can be gross if you think about it too long. All that worrying turned out to be for nothing though, because once I got used to Donny's dick I liked it. At first I just bobbed my head back and forth on it, only taking a couple of inches into my mouth at a time. Nervous and turned on, my mind was muddled and I couldn't think of anything else to do. Then Donny told me to use my tongue more and try to take more down my throat. When I tried to swallow too much of his dick, the head clogged my air pipe and I gagged.

"Slow down, Billy," said Donny. He pulled his dick out of my mouth. "This is your first cock, dude. Take it easy."

"I guess I got a little carried away." I was kind of embarrassed about being so eager and excited but I couldn't help it.

"You gotta learn to relax your throat."

"It's really long and thick."

"I told you," said Donny. "Just listen to me and I'll teach you how to be a good cocksucker." He said it matter-of-factly, like he was going to teach me how to throw a curve ball or something. I guess that's when it occurred to me. Everything had happened so fast, I didn't have time to think of myself as a cocksucker.

"I want you to suck the head and swirl your tongue around it. That'll make me cum in your mouth." He paused and wrinkled his brow. "Do you want me to cum in your mouth?"

"I guess so."

"That's what I thought." Donny kind of smirked when he said that.

Donny told me what he wanted me to do. He was bossy about it, which made me feel like I was his servant. Don't ask me why that turned me on, but it did. He told me to strip naked and lay back down on my stomach so he could look at my ass. Donny said I had a cute ass and he wanted to look at it while I sucked him off. I was very turned on by that. He told me to wiggle it for him when I got excited. He also told me to keep my dick covered. Seeing another guy's dick is a turn-off for him.

Naked on the bed with my butt exposed, I took Donny's dick back in my mouth. "Wrap those lips around my dick," he said.

Donny slid his dick in and out of my mouth, my lips gliding along the veiny shaft. I wiggled my butt, grinding my stiff dick between the mattress and my stomach. Donny liked it when I locked my lips real tight around his dick head and swirled my tongue under it. "That's it," said Donny. "Suck that cock." He did a lot of coaching. You could tell this wasn't the first time he had his dick sucked.

Donny bent over and ran his fingertips lightly all over my butt, like he wanted to feel the shape of it. Then he slapped his open hand in the crack of my butt and straightened up. The slap didn't sting but it sure made my dick twitch.

I did the tongue swirl and he went wild. He cursed and grunted like a caveman. "Suck my cock, man... Make me cum. Yeah, suck that cock."

Finally he was about ready and grabbed my head. "I'm gonna cum," he said. "Get ready for my load."

One more thrust and a jet of cum splashed all over my tongue. A few drops of the white stuff trickled out the corner of my mouth.

He pulled his still swollen dick out of my mouth and bounced onto the bed. With the taste of Donny's cum in my mouth, I rubbed my boner against the mattress. I didn't want to expose my dick and gross out Donny. It took me about two seconds to shoot.

"Damn, dude," said Donny, breathlessly. "That was pretty good for your first blow job. Are you sure you've never sucked cock before?"

I told him I hadn't, but I was glad he liked it.

My e-mail address is danielgre@hotmail.com.

Next: Chapter 2


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