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Criminal Minds Fan Fiction
Reed sat in the observation room, intently watching Rossi interview the boy. Even with his years of work in the BAU, Rossi seemed to be getting nowhere. He'd reviewed the boy's story and had picked apart the excuses that the kid gave regarding the missing girl- but the boy just wouldn't crack. It looked as if they'd hit another dead end and time was running out.
Suddenly, Reed straightened in his chair and clicked the mic to get Rossi's attention. When Rossi signaled that he heard the click, Reed spoke, "Talk about his family, mention his mother first, his father second, his sister third and his little brother last. I want to see his reactions to each person."
Rossi looked at the boy and said, "Kid, I'm trying to help you out here. There's no one here in this room except you and me. Your mother isn't here. Where is she? Oh, that's right, she took off for Greece as soon as she thought there might be trouble. How about your dad? Oh, he's gone too- isn't he? I think we're trying to extradite him from France. I guess it's a shame he didn't take you with him... And your older sister- the only person who ever seemed to show you any kindness- she's gone too! What age would she be now, if she was still alive- 26? 28? It's like your entire family turned their backs on you. Even your little brother has gone to live with your Aunt Margaret. He didn't even ask to say good by to you. That must hurt..."
The boy sat back in his chair with his arms crossed and glared at Rossi without saying a word.
Reed spoke again. "I think I have an idea. Let's give him a few minutes to stew and see if we can get a plan together."
Rossi stood up and said to the boy, "I recommend you think about the things we've talked about. You're not helping anyone with your silence. Most of all, you're not helping yourself. I'll give you a few minutes to consider what you want to do."
The team had gathered in the ready room down the hall, but before they could begin their discussion, everyone's phone started beeping. When the phones were checked, they all had the same message, "Mr. Scratch possibly spotted in New Orleans. Leave ASAP."
Prentiss faced the group and said, "Mr. Scratch is and has been our top priority for over a year now. If there's any chance that we can recapture him, we have to take it.
But, we don't need everyone. Reed- Rossi says you have an idea to get into this kid's head. You stay here and work your magic. JJ, you stay here with him. Everyone else- wheels up in 20 minutes. Let's go!"
After the rest of the team left the room, Reed and JJ sat at a table at the back of the room. JJ reached across the table and took Reed's hand in hers.
"How can I help? What do we need to do to get through to this kid?"
"I was watching him when Rossi was doing his interview. Every time his sister was mentioned, his eyes widened just a bit and he would swallow. He also clenched his hands in his lap- not in anger, but like he feels helpless. He wants to help the girl, he just needs the right impetus to break from the family."
"And you have an idea of what that impetus might be?"
"I do. He was very close to his sister growing up. I've read some of his journals and he developed quite a sexual interest in her. There are entire pages devoted to the things he wanted to do with her. Scenes on his bed, her bed, the couch in the living room, the kitchen table. It almost seems like he wanted to make a porno with her."
"Okay, so he has a thing for his sister. How does that help us?"
Reed reached into a thick folder and withdrew a picture. It was a young woman with blue eyes and blond hair, she could easily have passed for JJ's younger sister.
JJ looked from the picture to Reed's face and said, "What are you suggesting?"
"I'm suggesting that we only have five more hours to find the girl. If we haven't found her by then, she'll be dead. I'm willing to do anything I can to see that doesn't happen."
"Okay, I agree that we need to move fast. What do you want me to do?"
"I want you to sleep with him- as his sister."
"Spencer! Are you crazy? It's one thing for you and me to fool around- but to seduce a MINOR? We could BOTH lose our jobs, or even go to jail."
"I admit we're taking a chance, BUT- I've checked, the age of consent in this state is sixteen, Daniel is seventeen, AND, he's not a suspect- we just believe he has information that we need. He may not even know that he knows where the girl is- we just have to help him figure out what he knows..."
After a few more moments of discussion, they left the room, Reed went to the front desk to begin the paperwork to have the boy released into his and JJ's custody. When he was finished at the desk, he took a cup of water to the interview room.
"Rossi had to leave for another case. He left me in charge- You've been in here for quite a while. Do you need a bathroom? Food?" The boy shook his head at the offers of food and a bathroom break, but nodded when Reed slid the cup of water across the table.
He grabbed the cup with both hands and drained it dry. "Do you need more?" Reed asked.
"No. I'm good." the boy replied.
"Okay, I need to go do some paperwork. My partner, JJ will be here in a few minutes. I'm going to be honest with you- I don't think you belong here. I don't think you've done anything to keep you here, so JJ is going to take you out of here so you can get some fresh air.
You haven't met JJ yet, but I think you'll like her. She's really a sweet person." With that, Reed returned to the ready room to await JJ's return.
It took another 15 minutes before JJ entered the room. Reed, normally in perfect control of his body, felt his cock begin to lengthen and fill as he took in the outfit JJ was wearing.
No bra, but a tube top covered by an unbuttoned man's shirt that was tied above her belly button. A SHORT leather skirt with black, thigh high nylons and knee high boots with spike heels completed the ensemble.
"Are you ready?" Reed asked.
JJ smiled and lifted her leg to place her foot on the chair. Doing so afforded Reed a view up her skirt to where her blonde, curly bush nestled at the vee of her thighs. He playfully slid his hand along the inside of her thigh and she slapped his hand in mock anger.
"There's no time for that right now Spencer! We need to get on with this job if we're going to save this girl's life. Do you think the drugs have kicked in yet?"
"They should be, I gave him the water with the liquid benadryl about 20 minutes ago. If it hasn't taken effect yet, it should at any time now."
Together, they walked back to the interview room and Reed entered alone. The boy was sitting with his head on the table, snoring lightly. Reed signaled to JJ who entered and between the two of them, they got the boy onto his feet and walked him down the hallway to the back door. The team's SUV was parked just outside the door and they slid the boy into the back seat. JJ climbed in with him while Reed drove them back to the hotel.
At the hotel, Reed parked just outside of JJ's room. They got the boy inside and undressed him before placing him in the bed. They arranged two of the lamps to shine directly on the bed and left the rest of the room in darkness. Reed took the chair from the desk and sat in the farthest corner with the deepest shadow.
When all was ready, JJ sat on the edge of the bed and lightly slapped the boy's cheeks. "Daniel! Daniel! Wake up! Daniel Wake up- I need your help!"
The boy opened his eyes and jerked away when he saw the young woman beside him. "Jenna! What are you doing? You can't be here, you died!"
Jenna (JJ) laughed softly, "What? No, silly! I'm fine. You were dreaming when I came in- it sounded pretty crazy. You must have just dreamed that I died. BUT, as you can see, I'm right here!." She took his hand a placed it inside the shirt so the boy could feel her nipple through the tube top.
He applied light pressure and rubbed gently in a circular motion. "Jenna" inhaled sharply and arched her back, pushing her nipple more firmly against the boy's fingers.
"Are you going to HIM again?"
"I don't have any choice Buddy, you know how he is- if I say 'no' there's no telling what he might do- to me, to you... or Ryan. I can't take that chance.
I wish it was you though- you're the only one who has ever truly loved me. Sometimes I wake up at night and I want you so badly that I ACHE...
Check this out!" She cocked her knee and took his other hand, sliding it up her nylon until he was touching her bare flesh.
Although she was playing a role, JJ could feel herself getting excited in spite of herself. The boy's fingers were continuing to stimulate her nipple and when he touched her pussy, his finger slipped right in because she was so wet and excited.
She gasped with pleasure and reached down to take his penis in her hand. The boy was only seventeen, but he was easily as big as any cock she'd ever fucked. She used her free hand to untie the shirt and push it off her shoulders. Once the shirt was gone, she lifted Daniel's hand for a moment and quickly removed her tube top.
Even after two children, her breasts stood out perkily and her nipples swelled in anticipation. She unzipped and shimmied out of the leather skirt then leaned over and kissed the boy on his lips.
"Mmmmmm..." he moaned.
"You know, I've wanted to do this for the longest time... I've been watching you ever since you started going through puberty. I've loved watching you get hair on your chest, and your underarms. And watching that BULGE in your pants. Sometimes I think I'm going to go crazy if I don't get to taste you..."
She leaned down and licked the head of his cock, swirling her tongue behind the rim before taking him as deep into her mouth as possible. The way the boy bucked, she was half afraid he'd cum before she could get what she needed.
JJ pulled off of his dick and kissed her way up his stomach and chest to his lips. She straddled him and rubbed her pussy lips on his hard shaft.
"Do you like that Daniel? Do you like feeling my pussy rubbing over your cock? Do you want to slide it inside?" She reached behind her to place his dick head against her pussy lips and press down just enough to get the head inside.
The boy groaned and tried to thrust upward, but JJ rose along with him, so he couldn't go deeper in.
"Oh yes! You do want that, don't you Buddy? I want it too! I'll give it to you in just a minute, but I need to know something first- Where did Dad take the girl?"
"I don't know Jenna! Please don't tease me- I love you! Please let me fuck you- I've wanted to since forever...!"
"I will Buddy, I will let you fuck me. See, how does this feel?" With that, JJ slowly slid part way down the boy's cock before positioning his dick head back inside her pussy lips.
"Tell me Buddy- where do you THINK Dad took the girl?"
"I'm not sure, but when he got home, he gave mom some blooms from a mock-orange bush. He said that it was to prove he'd `done the deed'. Mom acted upset, said that if anyone found out, that it would be too easy to trace back to her- but Dad just told her she was being paranoid."
"Oh Daniel, that's great! I always knew you were the smartest one in the family. You're such a good boy- you deserve a reward!" JJ once again lowered herself onto the boy's thick cock, sliding all the way down until her pussy lips were grinding into his bush. She rocked there for just a second or two before returning to her original position.
"Where do you think he got the mock-orange Buddy?" she whispered as she nibbled on his earlobe.
"There's only one place that I know of- on the Varanas property. I remember going there once with Dad and he pointed out a big mock-orange bush next to the barn door."
"Oh Buddy! You're so smart! Are you ready to really fuck now? Do you want my pussy?"
"Yes Jenna! Please, I've waited so long. I want to feel your pussy all the way down on my cock!"
With that, JJ slid down his hard shaft for a third time, but this time, she didn't stop. She took control and fucked him like a two dollar whore. Bottoming out and rubbing her pussy lips on his balls, rocking back and forth, taking him deep- over and over. The boy was so over stimulated that it only took a few minutes before he shot his load.
JJ pushed her weight onto him to prevent him from trying to get up. She whispered into his ear "Wow! Buddy, you're such a good lover. Your cock felt wonderful spreading my pussy lips. I'm going to stay here with you all night... Just close your eyes and go to sleep... She stayed in position until his softening dick slipped out of her pussy. Soon, she heard him begin to snore softly.
When she was convinced that he was asleep, she rose from the bed and walked over to where Reed was sitting. He had watched JJ's whole performance and he was just as horny as the boy had been. His pants were down around his ankles and his dick was standing tall and proud.
"I just texted Garcia- she's checking out property records to see if she can find anything belonging to a Varanas and what, if any, link it could have to this case. You know Penelope, she'll probably be calling us back within the hour."
"Well, an hour is plenty of time to enjoy ourselves." She knelt between his legs and began to suck his hard cock. She used her tongue to stimulate the frenulum and to scrub the corona. She deep throated him and licked his balls.
Reed took her by the shoulders and raised her to her feet. He slipped his pants completely off and rose from his chair, leading her over to the other bed. They stood kissing for several moments before he gently pushed her down on the bed and lifted her ankles over his shoulders.
He knelt and began to kiss the backs and insides of her thighs. He worked his way upward and the closer he got to her pussy, the more he could smell her familiar scent. He could also smell the boy's ejaculate and his own cock throbbed in anticipation.
When he got to her pussy, he took his time to lick along the outside of her pussy lips, working up one side of her cunt and back down the other side. He used his tongue to tickle the little man in the boat and JJ groaned out loud. Finally, he slid his tongue as deep into her gash as he could. The taste of her fluid and the boy's cum nearly made him shoot his load then and there. He carefully worked out as much of the boy's juice as he could, savoring the blend of their two juices.
JJ had been to intent on getting the information out of Daniel to concentrate on her own orgasm, so she was primed to the gills and it only took a minute of Reed sucking her pussy lips into his mouth while stimulating her clit with his tongue to cause her to buck and jump, while she pushed his head hard against her pussy.
Once JJ began to come down from her orgasm, Reed stood up and got on the bed on his knees. His knees were on either side of JJ's ass and he pushed the knob of his meat downward to rub against her pussy lips. He leaned over and began to kiss and suck her beautiful nipples.
Once he felt his dickhead rubbing against her pussy lips he thrust deeply and smoothly into her silky smooth hole. He pushed in until his balls were pressed against her ass. He moved his mouth from her tit to her mouth and the two french kissed passionately.
"Fuck me Spencer! I need to cum again. I want to feel your cock sliding in and out of my pussy. Make me cum Spencer! Make me cum!" JJ was practically shouting with her need to be fucked.
Reed drew back until only the head was still inside, only to quickly slide back in to his balls. He quickly established a rhythm, stroking in and out, in and out...
JJ again, began to buck wildly with her second orgasm and the stimulation was about to cause Spencer to shoot his load as well.
"I'm about to shoot!" he panted. "Where do you want it?"
"In my mouth! I want to taste it!" she responded.
Reed quickly pulled out of her dripping pussy and lay down beside her with his head pointing toward her feet. He pushed her legs open and began to lick and suck her pussy for the second time.
JJ wasted no time before taking his meat into her hand and sliding it into her mouth. She deep throated him, going all the way to his balls and working her throat to stimulate him as much as possible. Since he was about to cum anyway, it only took a few seconds for his balls to explode and send a cascade of cum into her mouth. Some of the cum went into her airway, causing her to cough violently, but JJ kept her mouth pressed against his pubic hair until she swallowed every drop.
Meanwhile, Reed had been working over her pussy like the expert he was. He had her clitoris trapped between his lips while he used his tongue to massage it, licking it from the base to the top, around and around, before licking and sucking at her pussy lips. For the third time in twenty minutes, JJ erupted into her orgasm- this one was much more intense than either of the previous two.
Reed moved around again so the two could lay with their arms around each other while they kissed deeply.
Spencer's phone buzzed just a few seconds after they had started relaxing together.
"Yea Garcia, this is Reed. What did you find?"
"Well, Boy Wonder, I owe you and everyone else on the team an apology and I especially owe that poor girl an apology. What I found was a property that used to belong to a `Varanas' family. It's right next door to where Daniel's mother grew up. But there's something weird about the property... it seems that the last member of the family died about twenty years ago. There were no heirs, so no one ever took possession of it, BUT... the taxes have been paid up every year. So SOMEONE has been writing a check every year for the past twenty years... Something seems fishy to me." Garcia said. "When I pulled up copies of the checks used to pay the taxes, they were all signed by a Marjorie Whitman.
And before you ask- Yes, I got some aerial photos of the property- I've already sent them to your phone."
"Thanks Garcia!" Spencer said as he disconnected and began to pull up the pictures. He scrolled through over a dozen photos before he stopped and began to zoom in on one in particular.
"JJ look at this!" He said, holding the phone at an angle so she could see the screen.
"What am I supposed to be looking for?" She asked.
"See the building on the far right? Well follow that all the way back to the left. Now if you can see the intersection where the shed on the right and the shed on the left seem to merge... There's a bush there, and I'm pretty sure it's a mock-orange."
JJ sat up on the bed and said "At least we still have over three hours before the deadline. I'm going to grab a quick shower before we leave. The last thing I want to do is show up at a crime scene and having everyone there think that I smell like sweat and cum. And it wouldn't hurt you to rinse some of the sweat and cum off you too! She laughed.
Reed grimaced and took a deep sniff. "Whew! You're right about that..." He followed her into the bathroom and quickly stepped into the shower. He watched JJ as she douched to get out any of the remaining semen from tonight's activities. She was finished by the time he'd washed his pits and privates and he jumped out to get dried off while she took her own speedy shower.
After getting dressed, they got Daniel dressed as well. JJ wrinkled her nose at the smell of sweat and cum that emanated from the boy. "I guess if anyone asks about the smell we'll just say that we believe he had a wet dream while we were bringing him to his aunt's house." She said.
It had been decided that since he wasn't actually involved in the crime, that he'd be turned over to his aunt's custody once they got the needed information from him. Reed called the woman and told her that they'd be dropping the boy off in about twenty minutes.
Once he hung up, they walked the boy out to the SUV and got him into the back seat. Since JJ was no longer playing the part of "Jenna" she got into the front with Reed. Still under the influence of the benadryl, the boy was soon slumped across the seat snoring.
Once they dropped off the boy, they made their excuses and left quickly, it took nearly an hour to get to the address provided by Garcia. When they arrived, dawn was breaking and they could see the mock orange bush standing at the corner of one of the buildings. When they got out to look around, JJ saw that the door on that shed was closed tight with a padlock. Reed got a tire iron out of the truck and used it to break the hasp.
Inside, they found another door with a padlock and forced that one too. The second door opened into a windowless room about eight feet by eight feet. The girl was laying on a cot with a blindfold and a gag on her face and an IV in her arm. She was tied to the bed with nylon straps.
JJ checked her pulse and her breathing and nodded to Reed. "She's alive, call an ambulance!" She stayed with the girl while Reed went outside to call for help.
The next day, they were sitting in the bullpen at the BAU when the rest of the team entered dejectedly. At their questioning looks Prentiss responded, "No luck. He was there, but he was long gone by the time we arrived. There were two more victims that fit his MO. The coroner in New Orleans is trying to prove definitively whether it was the work of Mr. Scratch or a copycat.
I'm happy to hear that you two were successful. The girl should be back home with her parents, Daniel and Ryan are with their aunt and we'll be expediting their parents as quickly as the red tape allows.
How did you do it?"
Reed and JJ looked at each other and back to Emily. "Well, Reed figured out that Daniel misses his sister horribly and that she could be the key to breaking down the barriers. It didn't hurt that she and I look enough alike to be twin sisters."
Reed butted in, " And JJ is a fantastic actor. Once she got into character, it took her less than ten minutes to get the information we were looking for. I mean, you could almost say that it exploded out of him!"
JJ choked on the sip of coffee she'd just taken.
Emily looked at her bright red face and asked "Are you okay?"
"Yes! Yes... I just got something in the wrong hole- that's all."
This time Reed seemed to be choking.
"What is going on with those two?" Emily wondered as she walked away.
END