Hey guys Im a fan of so many of you I originally posted this awhile back but I have made some changes to both parts and hopefully you all will like it. Feedback is greatly appreciated good or bad. I apologize in advance Spanish is not my first or second.....
Intro
HOW DA FUCK CAN YOU SIT HERE AND LOOK AT YO FUCKIN SON LIKE THIS AND THINK THIS SHIT IS OK!!! I was heated as I held the gun to my father's head.
I looked over at my twin lying on the table getting fixed up by my father's personal doctor. When you're big time like he is, it was a necessity. I looked at my twin's black eye busted lip and bruised body as the gun began to shake as tears ran down my face.
My sperm donor held his hand to his second in command to stay put. Everyone in the room knew that when it came to J Sr. and his sons nobody got between them.
So you think you a man now cuz you got this gun to my head? My father said still smoking his blunt
Man, fuck you! I don't give a fuck about you or yo puss ass boys in this room cuz cant none of them get wit me!!! You made sure of that!! I hope my ol gurl bury yo ass and you better pray to God I dnt help her! I said in the nastiest way.
Aye man watch yo mutha fuckin-
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THE NEXT TIME I WONT MISS!! I can't believe I jus shot at my dad's right hand.
The only thing you ever done for me is give me my brother!! I swear to God the only thing that's keeping me from pulling the trigger is HIS love for you!! Remember that the next time you send him on one of yo errands. It took everything I had not to shoot this nigga. I put the safety back on the gun and walked over to my bro and helped him off the table. Nobody moved while I was taking my bro to the car.
Chap. 1
The only thing you ever done for me was give me my brother!! I swear to God the only thing that's keeping me from pulling the trigger is HIS love for you!! Remember that the next time you send him on one of yo errands. It took everything I had not to shoot this nigga. I put the safety back on the gun and walked over to my bro and helped him off the table. Nobody moved while I was taking my bro to the car.
I guess I should give yall some background on who I am and how I came to be in this situation. For you to fully understand my situation you have to understand that fate has a funny way of dealing you cards you have no choice but to play.
My name is La'Damien KeShawn Allen (also called Daedae), I'm 17 and if you haven't noticed I'm a twin. My twins name is Joseph Jermaine Allen (JJ or Maine) he is named after my so called father (hence why they so close) I'm the oldest by 5 minutes. I know what you thinking but hey I was first. I guess I should describe how we look cuz I know that's what most of yall waiting for anyway. My brother and I are Identical twins my Mom is Puerto Rican and had the attitude to match; My father is Puerto Rican, black and Jamaican. Good genes run in my family. (Lol) If we could be triplets Trey Songz would be our brother. We had his face, his caramel complexion, his lips; and Joseph could sing like him, when he wanted too. The only difference is we had light green eyes and Joseph had long hair like my mom; that he kept braided and kept the females on his dick. I on the other hand I liked to keep it low; with deep waves you could surf on. We both were cut more than Trey. I played basketball and ran track and Joseph ran track, played football and basketball. We stood at 6'2, 185 pounds of pure muscle. Joseph always complained that he wanted to be bigger but his genes jus wouldn't allow it. Anyway back to earlier that day.
Melody: So you coming out wit me tonight right? And don't say you and yo bro got to be somewhere cuz he promoting a club for yo dad..
DaeDae: Man sis I told you yeah plus Maine said he got something else planned.
It made me nervous that he wouldn't tell me what it was he was doing cuz we told each other everything; or we already knew. Being twins is sometimes scary. I always knew when something wasn't right with my bro and today was no different.
Melody: Ok cuz I was gon be 38 wit yo ass.
DaeDae: lol I got you. Plus you need me to drive since u wrecked car number 4 is it? Lmao
Melody: SHUT UP!!! And it 2 Bitch! Lol... so what yall doing this summer?
DaDae: same thing we do every summer since we was 16.....
Both: Work so yall can better appreciate the struggle I went thru for yall to live like this. they said in the Spanish accent.
Melody tried but was no match for DaeDae. He spoke fluent Spanish and sounded hella sexy with it.
Melody: Ugh I can't stand yo Spanish speaking ass. You gon get us in trouble... lol
DaeDae: Aww Ma no est Como Que. sabe que le consegu. Lol (aww ma, don't be like that. You know I got you. Lol)
Melody: what I told yo ass bout that Spanish shit nigga... We speak English ova here! lol
DaeDAe: Haha fuck ya mother! lol
I ducked just in time cuz she threw her book at me as the bell was ringing. The last class had ended, officially ending my year as a junior. Melody and I were always the last out of class.
DaeDae: So I take it you goin to my house?
Melody: Of course cuz you know I been planning this all week and you not gon flake out on me again.
DaeDae: Is all that really necessary?
This girl loves to give me attitude, lol. But she's right I have been flaking out on her a lot lately. Let me give you the inside scoop on my girl Mel. Mel is the baby in her family and she is the only girl out of 7 boys! I know right.... So when it comes to being seen or heard her 5'8 coca cola shape has no problem doing either. Melody was a redbone chick with ass for days. She kept her hair and nails done always. You never caught her looking busted unless you woke up with her and I'm the only one who does that. She was naturally beautiful; some would say she had that classic beauty feel to her. If you don't know what I'm talking about plz see Halle Berry in Introducing Dorothy Dandrige. My girl had all the boys sweatin her but like me it took the right swag to get our attention. I guess that's why we so close. Everyone thinks that she is my friend cuz I have money, but the truth is, ever since she stabbed a bitch that was fuckin up my car I knew I had a real friend in her and that was 2 years ago.
Melody: Nigga where the hell yo brother at?
DaeDae: He said he had to get something from his locker. Why you in such a rush?
Melody: Cuz I wanna see what new stuff you added to my closet cuz I know you went shoppin last week even tho you lied and told me you went to yo Grandma house last weekend.
DaeDae: Bitch I did go see my Gran ma! Fuck I was caught. I knew that the paps had taken pictures of me but I didn't think she would have seen me.
Melody: Nigga you know I stay on TMZ so don't even try to lie yo way out of this.
DaeDae: you can never let me surprise you.
Jus then my brother's girl Lisa walked up. Lisa was your typical ghetto high school girl. She thought she was the shit cuz she was the only junior to make cheerleading captain and she dated the most popular nigga in our whole school. Plus she was a ho and everyone knew it.
Lisa: Hey Keke hey Mel wats up?
DaeDae: BITCH WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU JUS CALL ME?! DNT YOU EVER IN YO LIFE CALL ME THAT NAME! YOU DNT KNOW ME AND I WILL END YO LIFE!
Lisa: Boy chill we practically family.
Melody: Girl, you playing with fire and u def bout to get burned.
Nobody ever called Me that name but my brother. Not even his parents called him that name.
DaeDae: FAMILY?! Bitch you jus some thirsty ass ho that's fuckin my brother cuz you think he goin pro! You gone be done by the end of the month. You jus a piece of ass to him!
Jus then JJ was walking up to us. People were starting to notice me goin off on her and they were starting to gather waiting to see if Melody was gon beat her ass.
JJ: What's up yall?
DaeDae: Fool you better check yo bitch cuz I'm bout to end her!
JJ: Dnt call her a bitch bruh.
Lisa: Hey bae. He getting all mad cuz I called him Keke. I told him I'm practically his sister so he need to chill..
She said this while trying to hug up on JJ
JJ: WTF?! Bitch you nowhere close to being family! And you betta watch yo mouth jus cuz I call him that dnt mean you can! And as far as being fam, the only person who is even close to bein fam is Melody so you can kill all that!
Lisa: SO AM I JUS A PIECE OF ASS TO YOU JOSEPH?!
Everyone was silent for a minute and you could see her go from shock to rage in the time it took for JJ to respond.
JJ: I'm not sayin that but dnt think after 3 weeks you fam. So jus chill ma.
Lisa: Fuck you and yo gay ass brother! Yes you heard right I'm Gay and everyone knows. Its not like it was secret. I've only been with 1 dude my whole life and I hope he dead somewhere in a ditch with his dick cut off and its stuck in the side of his neck! But I digress.
Melody: Bitch dnt make me bang yo ass right here in front of yo ppl! I dnt play bout that 1 right there and I will gladly make sure you never cheer again so keep it cute you basic ass ho!
The crowd that gathered started laughing at her and that jus added fuel to the fire. I loved the fact that Melody was right there when I needed her to fight these basic bitches. I dnt fight girls period!
Lisa: Are you serious? You bout to let her talk to me like that?!!!
JJ: Man you disrespected my bro and you lucky I aint say nothing... look man I'm bout to leave so jus walk away and imma call you later.
She stood there and looked at Me and Melody for a few seconds before walkin away.
DaeDae: Bitch walk!
JJ: Man get in the car. Lol
We all got in the car and JJ let the top down. My brother loved BMW, so it was no surprise that for his birthday he got the BMW 335si Convertible; Custom metallic white paint job, all white interior. White rims. He of course did his thing when he added the system and the custom rims. Everyone knew his car as for me I sported something a lil fancier, but that's for later.
JJ: man fool, you gotta stop talkin to my girl like that! It's hard enough tryin to get one to like yo ass. They already think cuz you gay you picky as hell and they know you gon criticize em for everything.
DaeDae: Nigga I aint gay! I jus like boys! but fuck Lisa and all the other thirsty ass broads. They jus wanna a free ride and dick.
JJ: Well all they gon get is free ride on this dick! lol
Melody: Yall niggas nasty as fuck....
DaeDae: Fool I never say nothing when you be tellin me how some nigga be havin yo pussy squeezing the dick cuz it be so good.
JJ: Hey man ewww. Don't nobody wanna hear all that right now...
Melody: Fuck you!
JJ: A turn that down Mom calling.... Oye mami. ... Si nosotros de camino a casa ahora... No. pero... Si ma... Si lo cuz de Melody nosotros los goin fuera esta noche. ..Ok, le Adora tambien. Adios (Hey mommy.... Yes we on the way home now... No... but... Yes ma... Only Melody cuz we goin out tonight...Ok, Love you too. Bye)
Melody: Damn fool yo mama make sure she keep yall speakin that Spanish!
JJ: Shut up! aye wat did she say?
DaeDae: She goin out of town for 2 weeks and not to stay out late and while she gone she gone put more security on us and she said for you to call her when we get home.
JJ: Por Que?
DaeDae: Yo no s_ el amor. Ella no dijo (I don't know love. She didn't say)
JJ: Damn. He must have been tryin to impress Melody cuz this nigga know he cant speak Spanish worth shit but he could understand it.
We drove the rest of the way to the house listenin to the radio. All the way home I couldn't shake this feeling that something bad was gonna go down and it centered on my brother. I don't know if yall have brother but it's like he my other half. It's like without him there is no me and he is the only reason I'm here. I know wat yall thinking (yall so nasty) but no I'm not romantically in love with my brother. I guess you can say it's that freaky twin thing but my mom says something happen to us b4 were born. I dnt believe it but she says that my brother got tangled up in his cord and I somehow managed to keep him from choking to death. She says ever since then I always looked out for him. I'm jus doing what feels natural. That's why it scares me to death this feeling I have tonight...