Thanks for all your suggestions and comments! I really like them, so PLEASE - if you read the story and like it or don't, tell me why.
(Thanks to Phil and Jam for their constructive critisicm on the last part! Really appreciated!!)
Sorry if the first part was so boring, but introductions are the hardest. I have part three almost ready and I promise things are much much much more interesting ;)
- Aaron
Well, there's not much else to say about school that day, other than the fact that I kept thinking about tomorrow and the trip . . . and the heaps of hot guys that I'll meet . . . mmmmm ;).
I took the bus home as usual and got home about 15 minutes later. I walked into my house, kicked my shoes at the wall and threw my bag down and let my grumbling stomach lead me into the kitchen. There, sitting cross-legged on a kitchen chair, shirtless and in his Tommy boxers, was my younger brother Rory, eating a bowl of cereal.
He looked over at me as I entered, "Hey Ry!"
"Whats going on Rory," I said as I walked over and messed up his hair.
Rory was only a couple of years younger than me, and I could tell he'd become a serious girl magnet in a matter of months. My girlfriends were always telling me that he was a hottie, and in a totally not gross way, I could see that. He was like my best friend. I don't think there are any two people closer in the world. I mean, we talk about just about anything and everything, and seldom do we get into arguments. We were open to each other about everything, but I still didn't want to come out to him. Some of you know the feeling. Like, you gotta accept how people are going to accept it before you go off telling people. Know what I'm saying?
"Ry man, I couldn't stop thinking about Mexico all day!"
"Um . . me neither bro" I knew I was ignoring him, but my stomach had other concerns right now.
I made myself a sandwich and sat down to talk to the guy.
"So, Ry . . what are you looking forward to the most?"
I was too involved in the food and without thinking, I blurt out, "The hot guys of course".
Part 3 coming soon