Allen IV Part 18
Allen 4:
The Boys In the Band
by tim the story guy
Hi everyone, this is Tim again. I apologize for Baldisore's last disclaimer, and don't worry, he won't be taking over the story anytime soon. This story is... wait a minute, let me see who is at the door.
Hello again Tim.
Nador! Not you again! What is it this time? Have you gotten a bigger rubber band for your slingshot?
Very funny Tim, but this time I have returned with a weapon that you cannot possibly defeat!
What is that Nador? It looks like a cheap squirt gun!
Laugh now Tim, until I shoot you with my shrink ray gun!
Right, a shrink ray gun made of plastic, and stamped Made In China on the side. You really keep me entertained Nador. Wait a minute! What's happening to me?! Nador! What have you done to me?! I'll get you for this, you ugly worm faced alien!
Now that Tim has been reduced to the size of a gerbil, you Earthlings have no one to save you! I will be very benevolent about being the supreme leader of this planet though. I promise that no one will be probed anally more than twice a day, and we'll only use the probe that's twelve inches long and four inches thick once a week. You Earthlings will become very used to being probed by us. Now, my first order as supreme leader of the planet Earth is... What's happening?! Tim is getting larger again! This can't be happening! That was a very high quality Made In China shrink ray gun! Oh no! My plans have been ruined!
Tim isn't getting larger yet, but he will be soon! Let me just put this silly thing in reverse!
Thank you so much M, it feels really great to be back to my normal size. Now, while I put Nador in a hamster cage where he belongs, why don't you destroy that ray gun?
You're welcome Tim. There, I crushed it with one hand! After all, it was made in China.
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Allen 4: The Boys In the Band
by tim
Chapter 18
From the last chapter:
The group entered through a service gate in the Spain and Mexico areas of the park, so they naturally rode the bobsled coaster first. It wasn't the most thrilling ride in the world, but it was fun. Since the trains were on the small side, the boys got a chance to talk to a few fans near the platform who were waiting to ride. After that, the group headed over to the nearby log flume, which they found out was one of the oldest operating flume rides. Once again it was not too thrilling, but still fun. Next though were the more thrilling rides. After leaving the first area they visited, and staying to the left, they came across a massive steel coaster that was aptly named The Titan. At over two hundred feet high, the ride gave the boys the thrills they were looking for. Plus it had the coolest looking trains they had ever seen, with the possible exception of Doug and Darren's tallest coaster. What really impressed them though was how the train came off the lift hill, and dived into a tunnel that came out near the nearby wooden coaster. Staying to the left after leaving that ride took them to the tallest wooden coaster in the park, named The Texas Giant. It was over one hundred and forty feet tall, and was one of the most twisted masses of wood they had ever seen.
After that, the group headed back toward the observation tower, riding a few smaller rides and coasters along the way. After passing through an area called Boomtown, the group took two left turns and ended up in Gotham City. The coasters known as Batman and Mister Freeze were as exciting as the two rides on the opposite side of the park. The launched take-off on Mister Freeze was a favorite of the boys. The next area, known as Goodtimes Square provided three unique thrills. One was an extremely tall parachute drop ride, and another was a coaster named Flashback. It was what was known as a shuttle coaster, and it traveled through three one hundred foot loops forward, then again backwards. The last coaster was a wooden coaster named Judge Roy Scream. What made this ride unique was that it was disassembled at a park in Houston, then moved to Dallas and recreated exactly the way it had been in Houston, including the small lake that it had been built beside. The boys had a great time at the park, and felt it was pretty close to what their friends Doug and Darren had built. They agreed completely though that it beat any park they had been to in states that shared a border with Michigan.
Judith had a good day too, and the ladies in the headline band announced that they had booked a private party at the waterpark next to the theme park that the boys had been to that day.
Out in California, Erik and Aaron were just wrapping up shooting for the day. “Cut!” yelled Sy. “I think we can call it a day boys.”
Then the ground began to shake lightly, and everyone held onto something solid until they realized it was a minor tremor. Erik couldn't help but to snicker as he looked over to see Aaron, who had a death grip on a roof support column, even though the tremor had passed.
“Babe, you're really going to have to learn to get used to those little ones!” snickered Erik. “I'll bet that one doesn't even make a mention on the evening news tonight.”
“He's right Aaron dear.” said Sy. “We get those little shakes all the time. If there's anything to worry about, one of us will always make sure that you're very well taken care of. Now, why don't you boys head on home, and relax for tomorrow.”
“Sure thing Sy, we'll see you in the morning.” replied Erik. “Are you okay now babe?”
“Yeah, I'm fine.” replied an embarrassed Aaron. “I guess you're right, and I need to get used to a little shaking from time to time.”
Erik and Aaron made it home to find the crew knocking off for the day. “Why are you guys knocking off early?” Erik asked Joe.
“John was suppose to do all of the high rigging today, so he was the only one with a harness.” replied Joe. “That little shake we got earlier jammed his harness though, and we can't get it to work now.”