A Tale of Two Subs

By Robert Louis / Robert Halstead

Published on May 18, 2024

Gay

Chapter 9. Patrick has nice feet.

Duke kept Luke at his feet for an entire half hour the night Luke's resistance broke and the sub realized that he craved the feelings that only a true sub could hunger and thirst for. This was quite a feat; if you've ever been wishing you could stop doing what you were doing for a Dom . . . whether sucking, massaging, drinking or whatever it might be because you're just getting tired and maybe even a little bored, you know that even five minutes kept at something seems like a very long time.

Imagine what it must have been for Luke, how long it seemed, and yet Luke started putting less effort into serving Duke's feet only twice. Each time was met with a few lashes and each time Luke was reminded he was being treated like a slave and responded accordingly.

It kept weighing on Luke's mind that he wasn't just some sexual partner but he was just a dumb kid who kept getting punished to control his behavior and increase the quality of his service to Duke. Luke found himself drinking in the pain, noticing how deeply it settled into his flesh, and realized that he even craved being controlled this way—through corporal punishment.

He realized he had ceased being an ordinary boy. He suddenly found Duke's feet all the more enticing and he made it a point to show Duke that he learned his lesson from that whipping.

Finally, Duke told the boy he could stop. He sent the kid into the bathroom so he could brush or use mouthwash or whatever he wanted in order to ten to his exhausted mouth for a bit. Duke also realized that something had shifted in Luke, that he was prepared to be formed into a slave, even if only temporarily. When he sent the kid off, he also told him, "I think that considering what happened tonight, you should be crawling back here to me on your hands and knees. Get used to doing that because you'll be doing it a lot."

As Luke heard Duke's words some kind of wave passed through him, and he felt like he was being shrouded from overhead and would be living in a certain kind of dark cloud from that point on. It wasn't anything that frightened him. It was something that would help him surrender anything Duke wanted from him.

Once the boy returned, crawling, head bowed, Duke could see how good it was for Luke to be treated this way. "Suck my cock now, faggot, like you've never sucked before. Suck my cock like the slave you're going to become one of these days." Luke never understood why Duke kept telling him he was going to be a slave. What could be more slavish than the way Duke is treating him now? Obviously, the boy still had an awful lot to learn.

Duke goes easy on the boy this time, however, since he knows how tired Luke is now. Just an ordinary blow job, nothing extreme, nothing forced. He just let Luke suck his cock the way he wanted to with no other directions. He had something else on his mind.

"This week I want you to gather up every single bit of financial information you have including all expenses, your income, savings, etc. I'll be sending you to a financial advisor who will go over it all with you. Then I'll probably have an idea of what will be best for you for the future and will be able to make some recommendations or decisions about you."

That gave Luke a lot more to swallow than the cock he was sucking at the moment. It gave him a lot more to suck up. For most guys who think they're subs or who want to experiment with it, none of it ever touches their finances. That's a big barrier or boundary. So when Duke tells Luke about the financial stuff, he's really testing hard with his desire to take over more of the boy's life. AS always, he's taking a risk that he might push too far.. . . . .

That week, Luke did have to deal with a lot of resentment and even anger at what Duke wanted from him. It wasn't until Thursday night that Luke actually started pulling some things together. That's what he was doing when there as a knock on his door. It was Patrick. Damn!

When Patrick walked in and saw all the papers spread over Luke's little "kitchen" table in his studio, he said "What's all this? What are you doing, Luke?"

"He wants me to get all my financial stuff together to meet with a financial advisor. Sounds weird to me. After all, I don't have much of anything."

"you sound annoyed."

"I am, a little, but not as much as I was right after he told me to do this."

"It does sound pretty extreme. I mean after all, most of us guys would rather show someone else our cocks or our asses rather than showing someone our bank book. I mean, I've never heard of anyone asking these types of questions."

"thanks for saying that, Patrick. It makes me feel better, like I should be guilty for feeling the way I do."

"You should never be guilty for feeling the way you do. You have no control over what feelings come up. Don't be so hard on yourself."

"You really think so, Patrick?"

"Yes, I do because it's true. And also, I thought we had agreed that you would call me Sir from now on."

"Oh, I'm sorry. You see, I'm so distracted that I stopped thinking about those things."

"Well, get your head back in the right place. It will definitely help you if you get naked now, too."

"Yes, Sir." And Luke starts to smile inside at how quickly Patrick is taking control of him again. He strips. He only had a tshirt, boxers and sweatpants. He was already barefoot. So soon he's naked and smiles shyly at Patrick who apparently has no desire to take his own clothes off at the moment.

"It's good for you to be naked when I'm not. It helps you understand our dynamic, don't you think?"

"Yes, it does, Sir. It feels right for me to be naked while other men are clothed."

"Some night we'll have to go to one of those clubs where things like this happen. I'd love to take you there and make you get naked. Maybe even have you on a collar and leash. that would be hot," says Patrick.

Luke takes a deep breath, almost a gasp at what Patrick is suggesting. "Have you ever been there before, Sir?"

"No, but I know of a place. They have something on line. I was checking it out the other day."

"wow."

"Anyway, it seems like your Sunday Dom is asking a lot. And it looks like you're going to let him move on you this way."

"I think so, Sir. But I only think so. I am curious, though, I have to admit."

"So he's going to have you see an advisor and not do it himself." "Yes, Sir. Said he might have suggestions, or decisions about me. Not exactly sure what that might mean, though."

"shit, Luke, I hope he's not gonna make you start paying for his attention? There are some men around who do that, dominate guys for money. As far as I'm concerned, they're basically prostitutes but they don't think of themselves that way. They think it somehow makes them superior. I've seen that on Twatter. They're all creeps, as far as I'm concerned. I'd hate to see you get victimized by him if that's what he's after?"

"It can't be that. He most realize that I barely have much of anything. I mean, I was a foster kid up until this year."

"Oh, I didn't know that. Do you think that's why you are the way you are—so submissive, I mean?"

"Not sure, Sir. This is all so new. Anyway, even if I go to the advisor, that doesn't mean I'm giving up control of my almost non-existent finances. I'm just curious to see what he has to say about it all. What his next step might be. But I can always refuse, after all."

"You sure you can refuse?"

"I guess it depends on what he wants."

"Well enough about what he wants and start paying attention to what I want. I only have two hours before I have to report at the hospital." "Yes, Sir." Luke just falls to his knees on his own.

"Yeah, Luke. You look good down there. I like seeing you like this—naked and kneeling like the slaveboy you are."

"He says I'm becoming one, not that I am one."

"But as far as I'm concerned, Luke, you're my slave whenever I'm here."

"Yes, Sir, whatever you want, you know that."

"So tell me what he's made you do recently."

"Suck and lick his feet. Made me do it for a long long time, too."

"Did you like it?"

`oh yes, Sir."

"Then why don't you show me." Patrick sits on Luke's bed and stretches out his legs."Why don't you take off my sneakers and socks, boy?"

"Yes, Sir," says Luke automatically. He crawls over to the couch and takes off Patrick's sneaks first.

"Is he making you crawl too?"

"Yes Sir," says Luke as he takes off Patrick's sweat-socks

"I showered before coming here, so my feet should be clean and not smell. Sniff them, Luke. Check out their smell."

Luke does as Patrick told him and handles his feet gently and reverently. "They're not bad. I can even smell a little of your soap."

"So show me what he's making you do. Be a good slaveboy for me, Luke."

Luke smiles at him and immediately starts licking his toes. Patrick takes a deep breath so he knows Patrick is enjoying this. Patrick has really nice feet. Short slender toes a little red at the tips. He licks a couple of them and then says "oh, what the fuck," and takes one in his mouth and sucks on it.

"Yeah, " sighs Patrick, so Luke really gets into Patrick's feet, getting at all of them more readily than he did for Duke because he really likes Patrick a lot. He doesn't feel that way about Duke. He respects Duke, even fears him a little, but he doesn't feel anything emotionally towards him, not yet, anyway. Patrick is starting to treat him like a slave, too, but he's really nice about it and that's cool too.

"You're pretty good at that, Luke."

"thank you, Sir. You have really nice feet, too."

Patrick chuckles. "I've never heard anyone call my feet `nice' before. I like the way you get off on my body. Help me get these pants off and you can suck and lick my cock and balls now like a good boy. Be a good cocksucker for me, slaveboy."

Luke loves the way Patrick calls him `slaveboy'. Soon Patrick's pants and boxer brief are off. Luke gets up between his legs and starts in on his balls.

Patrick sighs and moans. "that's it, boy, Make me feel real good, baby." Luke loses his mind and makes love to P's balls then licks his way to the tip of P's cock and swallows the head the way he did the last time, making love to it.

"Keep going, boy. YOU know what though? I wanna name you for myself. Give you a name only I can use."

Luke loses himself in the thought and tries to indicate approval by the way his tongue moves along the sensitive parts of Patrick's cock.

"Yeah. From now on, boy, your name is aleff . aleff . Suck my cock, aleff . Show me how much you love my cock, just like the faggot you are, aleff . Suck the cum out of my dick, aleff . Come on, can you taste my precum? there's more of the real thing coming your way soon if you keep doing that, aleff . Come on, slaveboy, suck me and make me cum!"

It doesn't take too long before P shouts out in ecstasy and shoots his load into Luke's mouth. "Take my load, aleff . roll it around with your tongue then swallow it like the faggot cocksucker you are. Yeah! Then lick me clean all over, boy. Good slave. Good aleff ."

P runs his hands through Luke's hair and massages his scalp. "Damn, aleff , I hope he never decides to shave off your hair."

"Don't think he will. He likes playing with it the same way you do. And he likes pulling it some times. He told me he doesn't like bald heads but most Doms shave the subs' heads bald. So you're safe with that."

"Hmmmm...i wonder what would happen it we had a disagreement. Me and him, I mean, not me and you?" Although P knows he could simply adjust to whatever Duke wanted. He doesn't really want Luke as a permanent slave or anything.

Instead of answering, Luke lowers his head and takes P's balls into his mouth, one after the other, toying with them with his tongue. Patrick is aware that Luke is using a diversionary tactic, but that's just fine. He doesn't need an answer. Besides, he has something else on his mind. "do you have any lube?" he asks Luke.

"Yes, Sir."

"get it for me. And a towel." No `please.' Not any more. Not the way things are evolving.

While Luke is getting the stuff he suddenly realizes that he would much rather let Patrick break him in and not Duke. He files that thought away. "You ever been fucked before?" he asks Luke.

"A couple times, Sir, a few years ago. One of the guys in one of the homes I was at. Older than me. Made me sit on him. Used vasoline as lube. real messy. Hurt like hell, too. I was glad when I got out of that place."

"how old were you?"

"15, Sir."

"Shit. That's too bad. Well I'm not gonna fuck you tonight, but I want to put my fingers in you. I promise I'll be gentle. okay?"

"Sure it's okay, Sir. whatever you want is okay. Mostly."

Patrick chuckles. "Mostly, huh?" He lubes up his pointer finger and makes Luke spread his cheeks. He puts his finger on Luke's hole and Luke gasps. " Ohh, please, Sir. Play with it without sticking it in?"

Patrick knows what he means and that's what he does. Luke sighs and moans. "Okay, slave. Here it is. I'm coming in. I want to know what you feel like inside." And with that, he inserts his finger using a lot of lube. Luke moans but doesn't fight him off or anything. Patrick manages to get his entire finger in and toys it around while Luke whimpers like a puppy.

"that's cute, baby," he says, poking a little more than then finally pulling out. He checks his finger. No brown on it. Good. He wipes his finger off in the towel. "I should make you suck my finger clean. Got the taste of your ass on it. " "Ew, ewww, no!" says Luke. "No way, Sir,"

Patrick chuckles again. "don't worry, dude. That would be gross as heck." He goes inside to wash his finger clean, then comes back out. He holds his finger to Luke. "Nice and clean now. Sniff." Luke does.

"Smells soapy now."

"Cool. So put it in your mouth, slave. Take the finger I shoved up your ass and suck it clean, slave. Piggy slave."

Luke fights the impulse to giggle and puts takes Patrick's finger in his mouth and toys with it with his tongue.

"So consider the symbolism of what you're doing, boy."

"I am, Sir. A lot of symbolism. Makes me into a real pig."

"Perhaps. I just think you're cute, and you're a real good boy for me and I like spending time with you. I'll take you out to breakfast again some time soon. I promise."

"That would be great, Sir. Just let me know."

Shortly after Patrick leaves to get to work, Luke gets a text from Duke with an address and office number. "I've made you an appointment for 11 Saturday morning. Be there."

"Yes, Sir," Luke texts back, then goes and finishes up getting his financial things together.

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