A Tale of Two Subs

By Robert Louis / Robert Halstead

Published on May 16, 2024

Gay

Chapter 7. Promises

Someone was knocking on his door at 5 am. Still half asleep, he opened the door. It was Patrick. "I don't want a bj," Patrick told him, "I just didn't feel like sleeping alone. It was a rough night. Let me go take a quick shower because I'm really icky after working hard."

"You don't need to shower, Patrick. I'm okay with icky," Luke told him. Patrick sniffs his own armpit and makes a face. "Oh man," he says, I am really ripe."

"Patrick, please, I'm a dirty, dirty boy. I can handle it, I assure you. Here: let me help you off with your shirt. Please, Patrick, don't worry about it. It's okay, really."

Luke begins to unbutton Patrick's shirt for him, and then kisses his bare chest. It's fine. I'm being trained to. . .'

"trained?" Patrick questions. "What do you mean?"

"Patrick, I'm very submissive. It's my nature. I've been with men who have gotten me to do things that most guys, even gay guys, would never think of doing. I don't want to scare you off or disgust you, but there have been lots of times when I've had my face buried in men's smelly armpits and been made to lick them clean. I hope this doesn't turn you off, but it's the truth. It's okay."

"You're sure?"

"Yes, Patrick, I'm sure. But don't worry about that. You're really tired, I know. We don't have to do anything at all. Come sleep with me. Put your arm around me the way you did the last time you were here. It will be fine, Patrick, just fine. Just let me help you get your pants off and we'll lie together until you've had some sleep. Okay?"

"Okay, Luke, as long as you're sure. I . . I'm not naïve, dude. I know all about guys being submissive. I should have guessed since last time you sucked me off but didn't care about me taking care of you as well. But I don't want you to lick my body, boy. I spent the night cleaning hospital rooms. I could be carrying all sorts of bad things. Unsanitary things. Too much. I don't want to make you get sick."

"Okay, that makes sense. Think of it this way, Patrick: I just want to help you get some rest. I'm tired too. Didn't sleep much last night. I know I'll sleep better with you close to me. Please. After we wake up later, you can shower and then I'll do anything you want me to. Okay?" Patrick smiles at him and runs his hand through Luke's hair. "Deal." Luke trembles inside at Patrick's gesture, hoping that maybe Patrick has Dom tendencies, even if they're undeveloped. He'd be glad to help Patrick's inner Dom emerge . . .

Luke opens up Patrick's pants and helps him slip out of them. He lies down on the bed and opens his arms for Patrick. Patrick slides into his arms and closes his eyes. Soon he's asleep. Luke quickly burrows himself into Patrick's scent, thinking of how Duke would be pleased to know about this, sure that Duke would have made him lick Patrick clean from head to foot, despite the hazard because Patrick had just come from cleaning hospital bathrooms. But Luke couldn't deal with that right now. Fortunately, he was soon back asleep himself.

A few hours later, he awoke, aware of the smell coming from Patrick's body. He lay there and inhaled Patrick and again wished he would clean Patrick himself. He snuggled his head into Patrick's chest, waking him up. Patrick reaches down and runs his hand through Luke's head. "Hey, piggy boy, you sniffing my stink, boy?"

Luke nods, rendered speechless by the way Patrick just addressed him. "Piggy boy?" !!!

"You stink hot. You stink masterful," Luke says, wondering about Patrick and what makes him tick besides the fact that he's one of the nicest guys Luke has ever met and his cock is beautifully crafted as well.

"I'll show you how masterful I can be after I scrub off all my stink and let you taste my body," Patrick says to him, tweaking one of his nipples and getting himself out of bed. "There are fresh towels in the closet in there and really good soap as well. Just call me if you need anything or if you need me to do anything."

Patrick chuckles, throwing his hands up in the air as he heads inside. Soon the shower is running.

Luke goes in to brush his teeth and gets out a new toothbrush for Patrick. "There's a new green toothbrush on the sink for you," he calls in. "Good boy," answers Patrick, and there's another hint? That's something a Dom would say. Something that Doms have said to him sometimes when he's yielded to more he thought he could handle.

He also remembers one of the Doms he spoke to on line once said, "Tell me what you would do to show me you wanted to be my good boy." He didn't answer because he thought it was a fucking stupid question to ask someone you know nothing about. For one it could be giving the first blowjob ever. For another it could be licking his feet clean. For a tougher dude it might be taking a beating or drinking his piss. then "Shit! Duke is going to make me do that some day." He shuddered and hoped it would be a long way off.

Patrick calls out to him. "Why don't you come in here and sniff my asshole for me. Tell me if all the stink is gone."

Luke almost faints from delirious shock. Wow. And, of course, he accepts the invitation and yes, all the stink is gone. He answers Patrick then drives in to pleasure the guy back there. Patrick groans and pushes himself even more into Luke's face.

"Stand up and wash yourself while I watch," Patrick says to him eventually. Luke puts on a real show starting with his own armpits then roughly around his nipples then down to where he would have pubes if Duke wasn't keeping him shaved down there. Patrick takes the soap from him and lathers up his hands making Luke take back the bar while Patrick reaches down and takes the boy's balls in his hands and vigorously scrubs them making Luke actually cry out a couple of times.

Patrick smiles at him and gives him a kiss, forcing a chunk of saliva into his mouth with his tongue while continuing to play with, pull, and squeeze his balls. Luke gets up on his toes at one point then Patrick, still holding his sac, pulls it down making Luke land on his feet again. Luke's eyes grow bigger as he looks into Patrick's green eyes. He's not sure how to read what's in them; he's too inexperienced for that. But whatever it is, it is clear to Luke that Patrick has decided to toy with his submissiveness a little.

They get out of the shower. Luke reaches for towels but Patrick stops him. "Get down and lick the water off my feet, Luke, like a good boy." Luke almost cries he's so happy about all this. He gets down and starts to lick, knowing that he could never get it all. He adds sucking to licking, especially when he passes over Patrick's long toes, until finally Patrick says, "that's enough down there. Come on up and get under my balls. Start licking me in back of them then take them in your mouth as well."

Patrick orders the boy to lick from his balls all the way up into both armpits to make sure the stink has been washed away. Unfortunately it has, but Luke can hope it will be back again some other time. "Let's use the towels and finish the job," says Patrick, so that's what they do. When they finish Patrick pushes Luke to leave the bathroom first. He quickly rolls up his towel and snaps it at Luke, landing a sharp lash at the center of one Luke's right ass cheek and Luke jumps. "That stings like a whip," he tells Patrick. "Noted," Patrick answers. There's a vague threat in the air.

"I'm going to stay standing this time while you suck my cock," says Patrick, already getting hard. "Right here." He puts his hands on his hips. Right away Luke kneels before him and reaches for Patrick's dick with his mouth. "Nice and slow, Luke. Make love to my meat," he says.

"Show me how much you like cock, how much you crave cock like a submissive faggot."

Luke drinks up the words Patrick is using deliberately to conquer him for himself. He lovingly shows Patrick how grateful he is for the way he's speaking to him, and certainly how much he loves and craves Patrick's cock, and he salivates at the same time because he's so turned on kneeling there before Patrick, sending waves of pleasure up the young man's body.

Patrick lays both hands on Luke's head, exploring his still damp hair and sometimes holding on tightly so he can manipulate Luke's mouth on his dick. He has good staying power and he intends to make sure Luke will never forget what it's like to serve Patrick's desires.

Patrick's style is so different from what Luke has been fantasizing about and also how Duke is working with him. "Different strokes for different folks," he says to himself, and decides not to compare the two at all and just enjoy what's happening and how Patrick is treating him.

Patrick shoots a large load into the sub's mouth at last and Luke has to swallow twice to get it all down. "Get used to what I taste like, boy," he says. He reaches down and takes both Luke's nipples in his fingers then lightly pulls them up. Luke gets the hint and gets himself back up on his feet.

Patrick kisses Luke on the forehead. "Get dressed," he says. "I'm taking you out to breakfast. Even though it's almost noon."

"I'm living on your time right now, Patrick," says Luke as he puts on a t-shirt and gym shorts. They walk to an all-nite diner which is only three blocks from where Luke lives. "So tell me something," says Patrick while they're walking. "This man you've been seeing, . . . does he intend to cage your dick?"

"He hasn't said anything about it yet. He doesn't tell me much at all about his intentions, just that I have to go to him on Sunday afternoons and I have to beg his permission to jerk off."

"That's quite a bit, actually, Luke, but I bet he will try to cage you sooner or later, considering that he's also taken charge of how often you masturbate."

"Patrick, I think this is worse because it would be so easy for me to give in and just do it. I have to keep choosing to give him that control. If he cages me, then there's no way I could give in. I think that seems easier."

"You'll never know until you have to try it," says Patrick. "Heck, Luke, you've given me two of the best blow jobs I've ever had in my life, but you haven't touched yourself to get off. How am I going to catch up?" he asks jokingly.

They enter the diner and sit down. The waitress brings them coffee. Patrick asks for water for them both. "I'll do the ordering. Is there anything you don't want or can't have?"

"No," says Luke, almost adding "Sir". But getting back to what you said before, about catching up. There's nothing to catch up to, Patrick. I'm here for you. Whenever you want. Whatever you want. I really like you, Patrick. I like doing what you tell me to do. That's who I am. That's who I want to be," Luke tries to explain. "It means a lot to me that you get to cum and I don't. I know that sounds weird, maybe, but . . . "

". . .not weird at all. Don't put yourself down. I get it, Luke. Actually there's something pleasurable about the whole thing. I use you to get off. That's what you're here for. My orgasm is the only one you and me care about. Your puny dick isn't part of this whole scene."

"Put that way it sounds even hotter."

The waitress comes by and Patrick orders bacon and scrambled for both of them. He chuckles. "Yes, it does sound hot. I mean, I'm not super hung, but it's fun to be with someone whose dick is smaller than mine. I like the feeling of being superior."

"I like the feeling of you being superior too," says Luke, and then giggles.

"your face is very cute when you giggle," says Patrick. "Does that Sunday guy like your face at all, or is it only your ass?"

Luke sticks his tongue out at Patrick. "He adores my face, he tells me all the time. But he says my face is most beautiful when I'm crying. He likes it when he can make me cry."

Patrick shudders. "I'd much rather make you smile, I think, but yeah, it would be hot to watch you cry. I also like what your face looks like when you're feeling submissive to me. I really like look on your face when I say things that push your kinky buttons. I like treating you like my little toy that I can wind up and get spinning whenever I want just by speaking."

"Then you two would have something in common. After all, a toy is an object, and he calls me his property sometimes. An object."

"do you like that generally, to be treated that way?"

"I have no way of knowing yet. Not really. I like what I feel like with you, Patrick, that's all you need to know."

"So tell me something. What would happen if, say, I showed up here on a Sunday night?"

"Won't be sure until it happens, like you told me before. I might be too worn down, too broken, or too exhausted."

"Or you might really benefit from having someone to comfort you, to make sure you're okay."

"Patrick . . . .

" . . . . . what, Luke? . . . "

"Patrick, I'll make you a promise, okay?"

"sure. What are you going to promise me?"

"I promise . . . that you can have whatever you want from me, . . . . . any time you knock on my door . . . no matter when."

"That's a big promise, Luke."

"I know. And I wouldn't promise that to anybody else. Just you. He has me Sunday. You have me all the rest of the time, as much as you want." "But what if I get here and you have someone with you, someone you're having a good time with?"

Luke thinks a bit. "I don't know. We'll have to find out, won't we?" "Perhaps. But I think it will be best if I call ahead. Save me from wasting a trip for nothing."

"Patrick, if I'm with someone here and you knock on the door, I'd let you in. AND I'd let you take over, too."

"That's fine, boy. But I think I'll call first. End of discussion. Eat your toast, boy."

"Yes, Sir." Luke claps his hand over his mouth. Patrick laughs out loud. Luke eats his toast.

THAT'S ALL FOR THIS CHAPTER!

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